Question

【题目】看图写作：假设你是XX中学高一学生李华，下面四幅图描述了上周日你放学回家的经历。请根据图片的先后顺序，将这件事以日记形式记述下来，并适当表达自己的感受。

注意：

1．日记的开头已写好。

2．词数120字左右。

提示词：烟斗 pipe 桶 bucket

April 5th, 2015 Sunday Cloudy __________________________________________________________________________

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Answer 1

【答案】

There was an old house on my way from school to home. Last Sunday, I happened to see some smoke coming out of its window when I passed by. There was no doubt that the house was on fire. I was so worried that I took immediate actions to solve the problem. I found a bucket far away from the house and carried some water with it. Luckily, the fire did not grow bigger. So I put out the fire with the water at once.

To my great surprise, an old man, who seemed to get wet because of the water, appeared behind the window. He shouted at me angrily with a wet pipe in his hand. At that moment, it suddenly occurred to me that the smoke was from his pipe. As soon as I realized what had happened, I ran away from the old house immediately.

【解析】

试题分析：考查看图作文。写好看图作文需要注意以下几个方面：1、认真观察，理解图画；2、要发挥联想和想象力。在此基础上，确定文章的人称和时态，灵活运用英语知识，采用不同的表达方式将文章完整地表述出来。同时应选用准确的语言和恰当的连接词与过渡词。这篇文章要求以日记的形式展开，故注意时态为一般过去时，人称为第一人称。

【亮点说明】本文使用了多种句型，使结构更加合理，表达更加到位。如定语从句：To my great surprise, an old man, who seemed to get wet because of the water, appeared behind the window.，再如名词性从句：As soon as I realized what had happened, I ran away from the old house immediately.。除此之外，还使用了许多的短语，如：happen to do、pass by、take immediate action to、put out the fire等。