Question

【题目】（二十）

假如你是高三学生李华，你的英国笔友Tracy在邮件中讲述了她的新年意愿，你很受鼓舞。请用英语回复Tracy，交流分享一下你的新年打算。内容主要包括：

●改进学习方法

●加强体育锻炼

●考后旅游放松

参考词汇：新年意愿：New Year’s Resolution

注意：

(1)词数不少于80；

(2)请在答题卡上作答；

(3)开头语与结束语已为你写好（不计入总词数）。

Dear Tracy,

I was so glad to get your e-mail and greatly encouraged by your New Year’s Resolution.

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Yours,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear Tracy,

I was so glad to get your e-mail and greatly encouraged by your New Year’s Resolution. Now I’d like to share mine with you.

As a Senior Three student, finding an effective learning method is of vital importance to improve my study. Therefore, in the coming year, I’ll focus on adopting a better learning method to get better grades. Besides, I know my goals can’t be realized without good health, so I’ve decided to spend at least half an hour each day exercising, which will surely help me keep fit. Moreover, I plan to relax myself by traveling after the exam. Could you recommend a good place to me?

Best wishes.

Yours

Li Hua

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇提纲式写作。依据所提供的信息，以提纲中的三点内容为主，清晰表达，并且要不失亮点，准确把握英文句子的书写，避免出现汉语式英语的现象。

【亮点说明】范文共三段，开头直接表明自己也要跟对方分享新年意愿，范文虽然结构简单，但是层次清晰，其中也用了一些高级的句型，使得文章水平在一个高的层面，如: I know my goals can’t be realized without good health等宾语从句，还有非限制性定语从句so I’ve decided to spend at least half an hour each day exercising, which will surely help me keep fit.；最后的疑问句Could you recommend a good place to me?婉转的说法，使得文章读起来更加通畅。还采用了一些比较好的短语，focus on，decide to，有条有理，避免文章比较单一，简单无味；同样有一些好的衔接词，使得文章读起来通顺，有序。Therefore，Besides，Moreover这些都给文章带来了亮点。还要注意的是最后阐述自己观点时，要观点明确，不可含糊。