Question

【题目】Correction 3（2017·新课标III卷）

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2. 只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

When I look at this picture of myself. I realize of how fast time flies. I had grown not only physically, and also mentally in the past few years. About one month after this photo was took, I entered my second year of high school and become a new member of the school music club. Around me in picture are the things they were very important in my life at that time: car magazines and musical instruments. I enjoyed studying difference kinds of cars and planes, playing pop music, and collecting the late music albums. This picture often brings back to me many happy memories of your high school days.

Answer 1

【答案】

When I look at this picture of myself. I realize how fast time flies. I grown not only physically, also mentally in the past few years. About one month after this photo was , I entered my second year of high school and a new member of the school music club. Around me in picture are the things were very important in my life at that time: car magazines and musical instruments. I enjoyed studying kinds of cars and planes, playing pop music, and collecting the music albums. This picture often brings back to me many happy memories of high school days.

【解析】

第一处：删除realize后的of 考查介词。realize是及物动词，后面接宾语时不需要介词。

第二处： had→have 考查动词时态。根据时间状语in the past few years判断用现在完成时。

第三处： and→but 考查连词。固定短语not only…but also…意为＂不但……而且……＂。

第四处： took→taken 考查动词。根据句意可知此处表示被动含义，故把took改为taken。

第五处： become→became 考查动词时态。根据and前面的动词entered判断该句应该用一般过去时。

第六处：在picture前加the/ this 考查限定词的用法。单数可数名词前应该有限定词，根据句意可知在picture前加the或者this。

第七处：they→that/which 考查定语从句。they不能引导定语从句，因为指代things，所以把they改为that或者which。

第八处：difference→different 考查形容词。修饰名词kinds应该用形容词形式。

第九处： late→latest 考查形容词最高级。根据句意可知此处指最新的音乐唱片，故把late改为latest。

第十处：your→my 考查代词。根据句意可知此处是我高中时代生活的美好回忆，故把your改为my。