Question

【题目】 短文改错(共10小题；每小题l分，满分10分)

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。

修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：

1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2. 只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

One day, little Tony went to a shopping center with his parent. It was very crowded. Tony saw a toy on a shop window. He liked it so very much that he quickly walked into the shop. After looks at the toy for some time, he turned around and found where his parents were missing. Tony was scared and begun to cry. A woman saw him crying and telling him to wait outside a shop. Five minutes later, Tony saw parents. Mom said, ＂How nice to see you again! Dad and I were terrible worried.＂ Tony promised her that this would never happen again.

Answer 1

【答案】

One day, little Tony went to a shopping center with his . It was very crowded. Tony saw a toy a shop window. He liked it so very much that he quickly walked into the shop. After at the toy for some time, he turned around and found his parents were missing. Tony was scared and to cry. A woman saw him crying and him to wait outside shop. Five minutes later, Tony saw parents. Mom said, ＂How nice to see you again! Dad and I were worried.＂ Tony promised her that this would never happen again.

【解析】

第一处：parent→parents。结合下文的＂his parents were missing＂可知托尼是和爸爸妈妈一起去购物的，因此应用复数形式parents。

第二处：on→in。结合生活常识可知，这里表示在商店橱窗里摆放着一个玩具，故应用in。

第三处：去掉very。这里 so...that...引导结果状语从句，表示＂如此……以至于……＂，因此very应去掉。

第四处：looks→looking。结合语境这里应用动名词作介词After的宾语，故应把looks改为looking。

第五处：where→that或者去掉where。本句中连词that引导的从句充当动词found的宾语，that不作句子成分只起连接作用，同时宾语从句又可以省略掉连词that。

第六处：begun→began。这里是对过去发生的事情的客观叙述，应用一般过去时，故应把begun改为began。

第七处：telling→told。此处and连接的两个先后发生的动作在时态上应保持一致，故应把telling改为told。

第八处：a→the。结合语境可知，同一名词第二次提到应表示特指，故应把shop前的a改为the。

第九处：parents前加his。结合语境可知,这里parents并不是表示泛指而是指托尼的爸爸妈妈，故应在parents前加his。

第十处：terrible→terribly。修饰形容词应用副词,故用terribly。