题目内容
【题目】Correction 1(2017·新课标I卷)
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:
1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
In the summer holiday following my eighteen birthday, I took driving lessons. I still remember how hard first day was. Before getting into the car, I thought I had learned the instructor’s orders, so once I started the car, my mind goes blank, I forgot what he had said to me altogether. The instructor kept repeating the word, "Speed up!" "Slow down!" "Turning left!" I was so much nervous that I could hardly tell which direction was left. A few minutes late, the instructor asked me to stop the car. It was a relief and I came to a suddenly stop just in the middle on the road.
【答案】
In the summer holiday following my birthday, I took driving lessons. I still remember how hard first day was. Before getting into the car, I thought I had learned the instructor’s orders, once I started the car, my mind blank. I forgot what he had said to me altogether. The instructor kept repeating the , "Speed up!" "Slow down!" " left!" I was so nervous that I could hardly tell which direction was left. A few minutes , the instructor asked me to stop the car. It was a relief and I came to a stop just in the middle the road.
【解析】
【文章大意】本文是一篇记叙文。文章主要讲述了作者在暑假期间考驾照第一天发生的故事。
第一处:eighteen改为eighteenth 考查数词。句意:在我十八岁生日后的那个暑假。eighteen意思为"十八,十八个",表示数量,eighteenth表示"第十八个的",故将eighteen改为eighteenth。
第二处:first前加the/my 考查冠词。句意:我依然记得第一天是多么艰难。句中特指开始学驾照的第一天,所以在first前加上the。也可以加上my,my first day表示"我(学驾照)的第一天",故在first前加the或my。
第三处:so改为but/yet 考查连词。根据句意可知作者本以为自己已经掌握了教练的话,结果一发动车,脑中一片空白,前后文为转折关系,故将so改为but或yet。
第四处:goes改为went 考查时态。根据前文中的started可知时态为一般过去时,故将goes改为went。
第五处:word改为words 考查单复数。句意:教练一直喊"加速!""减速!""左转!"。word"单词,消息",words 可以表示为word的复数,也表示某人说的话,这里指教练说的那些话,故将word改为words。
第六处:Turning改为Turn 考查非谓语动词。分析语境可知教练的话"加速","减速","左转"都是祈使句,根据前文"Speed up!" "Slow down!"也可以看得出来。祈使句应该用动词原形,故将Turning改为Turn。
第七处:much去掉 考查固定句型。句意:我如此紧张以至于无法分辨哪个方向是左。固定句型so...that…表示"如此……以至于……",much为多余成分,故将much去掉。
第八处:late改为later 考查副词。late在此作副词,late"迟地",later"稍后、随后"。此处表示"几分钟之后",故将late改为later。
第九处:suddenly改为sudden 考查形容词。句意:我来了个紧急刹车。suddenly是副词,表示"意外地,忽然地"。sudden为形容词,表示"突然的;迅速的",修饰名词stop用形容词,故将suddenly改为sudden。a sudden stop表示"急刹车"。
第十处:on改为of 考查介词。分析语境可知此处表示"在路中间急刹车",on the road表示"在路上",the middle of the road表示"路的中央",强调的是"the middle",故将on改为of。