Question

【题目】书面表达

假如你是一中的李华，你在某英文论坛上看到一个帖子。澳大利亚中学生Martin想来中国旅游，你向他推荐了西安市，请根据以下提示写一封电子邮件。

1.自我介绍；

2.推荐理由：历史悠久、景色优美、文化丰富、市民友好、小吃多样；

3.你的祝愿。

注意：1. 词数：100左右；

2．文章的开头结尾已经给出，不计入总词数；

3．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

Dear Martin,

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Yours,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear Martin,

I’m very glad to have read the post that you put on the English Forum.I strongly recommend that you pay a visit to Xi’an．

I’m Li Hua, a student from No.1 Middle School, good at Chinese geography and history. When it comes to

traveling in China, Xi’an is a popular tourist destination. First of all, Xi’an is not only a city with a long history

but also has many places of interest,where you can enjoy yourself.Second, people in Xi’an are friendly, kind,

and willing to help others,which can make your visit comfortable and pleasant.Third, you can have a chance to

experience different cultures and enjoy various delicious snacks in Xi’an. In addition, I’d like to serve as your

guide if you come．

I do hope that you will have a good time in China．

Best wishes!

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

书信类作文是高考的主流文体，在写作时要注意称呼的使用，如：Mr或Mrs等等。如果开头已给出的话，则需要将重点放在正文上。书写正文的时候一定要注意：不要遗漏文中给出的要点：1.自我介绍；2.推荐西安市的理由：历史悠久、景色优美、文化丰富、市民友好、小吃多样；3.你的祝愿。需要先将文中的内容表述清楚，语句要通顺流畅。尽可能地避免出现语法错误，做到文中语意清楚，简单明了。根据文章内容可适当增加一些细节，以使表达更加顺畅。写作前还要根据内容判断确定时态和人称。尽可能地得体地使用所学词汇和句型。如能使用一些高级词汇、常用的短语和高级句式，则会给文章增添色彩，提高作文的档次。恰当使用一些连词和插入语，可以使文章表达更加自然、流畅。