Question

【题目】短文改错

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

During this summer vacation, Li Lei went to teach in a small but less-developed village with others volunteers .When he arrived, he found the people here lived a tough life and all the children were crowded in a poorly-furnished room. Greatly to his delight, the children are lovely and friendly. Though he only had something simply to eat, he adapted himself to the hard life soon. During breaks, he often played games with his students. At night, he was busy with preparing lessons or checking his student’s homework. Realized the importance of education, he has made up his mind to become a teacher after he graduate from the university.

Answer 1

【答案】

【1】第一句 but→ and

【2】第一句 others→ other

【3】第二句 here→ there

【4】第二句 all前面加that

【5】第三句 are→ were

【6】第四句 simply →simple

【7】第六句 去掉with

【8】第六句 student’s → students’

【9】第七句 Realized →Realizing

【10】第七句 graduate →graduates

【解析】

【1】第一句 but→ and 前后两个词之间没有转折关系，故把but改为and。

【2】第一句 others→ other others不修饰名词，而other可以修饰复数名词，故把others改为other。

【3】第二句 here→ there 从语境判断他到了那个小村子，应该用there。

【4】第二句 all前面加that 两个陈述句作宾语从句时，第一个从句的that可以省略，而第二个从句的引导词that不可以省略，故在all前面加that。

【5】第三句 are→ were 故事讲述的是过去的事情，应该用一般过去时，故把are改为were。

【6】第四句 simply →simple 修饰不定代词用形容词，故把simply改为simple。

【7】第六句 去掉with 固定短语“be busy doing sth”，而be busy with 后面应该跟名词，故把with去掉。

【8】第六句 student’s → students’ 从语境可知此处指多个学生，属于以-s结尾的复数名词的所有格，故把student’s 改为 students’。

【9】第七句 Realized →Realizing 非谓语短语作状语，动词和句子主语之间是主动关系，应该用现在分词，故把Realized 改为Realizing。

【10】第七句 graduate →graduates 根据语境可知此处介绍将来的打算，在时间状语从句中应该用一般现在时表示将来，故把graduate 改为graduates。