Question

【题目】短文改错

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：

1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

The other day, I was praising by my teacher at the class meeting. He says before the whole class that only if we put our heart into our lessons could we make a great progress. He also said I set a good example to all of my classmate and that I memorized all the words of Unit 1 as if I was not good at English. He also added that anyone should learn from me. Heard what the teacher said, I was more than glad and my heart beat wild. At the same time, I made my mind to study harder. From my own experience, I’ve learned that several words of praise can makes a great difference to someone.

Answer 1

【答案】

The other day, I was by my teacher at the class meeting. He before the whole class that only if we put our heart into our lessons could we make great progress. He also said I set a good example to all of my and that I memorized all the words of Unit 1 if I was not good at English. He also added that should learn from me. what the teacher said, I was more than glad and my heart beat . At the same time, I made my mind to study harder. From my own experience, I’ve learned that several words of praise can a great difference to someone.

【解析】第一处：praising→praised 句意：几天前，我被我的老师表扬。I和praise是被动关系，故praising改成praised。

第二处：says→said 这篇文章讲述的是几天前的事情，用一般过去时，故says改成said。

第三处：去掉a progress是不可数名词，前面不能用不定冠词a，故去掉a。

第四处：classmate→classmates classmate是可数名词，和all of搭配用复数，故classmate改成classmates。

第五处：as改成even 句意：即使我不擅长英语，但我记住了第一单元的所有单词。even if意为＂即使，尽管＂，故as改成even。

第六处：anyone→everyone 句意：他也补充说，每个人都要向我学习。anyone任何人，everyone每个人，故anyone改成everyone。

第七处：Heard→Hearing 这句话使用非谓语动词作状语，I和hear是主动关系，用现在分词作状语，故Heard改成Hearing。

第八处：wild→wildly 修饰动词beat用副词，故wild改成wildly。

第九处：make后加up make up one’s mind to do sth.为固定搭配，意为＂某人下定决心做某事＂，故在make后加up。

第十处：makes→make 情态动词can后面接动词原形，故makes改成make。