Question

【题目】短文改错

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号(/\)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。

修改：在错的词下面画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1. 每处错误及修改均仅限一词；

2. 只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

As the saying goes, chance favored the prepared mind. I learned this from one of my experience. I was not chosen as member of the volleyball team of our school. Because of this, I decided to give up play volleyball. Luckily, my best friend stopped me but pointed out that it was my laziness and poor preparation which led to my failure. After that, I practiced playing volleyball on every day. When another tryout arrived, I was full prepared and tried my best. As a result, I was selected and became an important player on our school team.

From this, I am firmly convincing that we are able to seize a chance as long as I get well prepared.

Answer 1

【答案】

As the saying goes, chance the prepared mind. I learned this from one of my . I was not chosen as member of the volleyball team of our school. Because of this, I decided to give up volleyball. Luckily, my best friend stopped me pointed out that it was my laziness and poor preparation led to my failure. After that, I practiced playing volleyball on every day. When another tryout arrived, I was prepared and tried my best. As a result, I was selected and became an important player on our school team. From this, I am firmly that we are able to seize a chance as long as get well prepared.

【解析】

第一处：句意：俗话说，机遇垂青有准备的人。句子的主语chance是单数，所以谓语用单数。故favored 改为favors。

第二处：one of后面跟可数名词的复数形式，指“……之一”。故experience改为experiences。

第三处：此处指“作为校排球队的一员”。故as后加a。

第四处：give up doing…是固定搭配，指“放弃做某事”。故play改为playing。

第五处：前后两句是语意的顺承，并非转折。故but改为and。

第六处：本句运用了强调句型“It is/ was + 被强调部分+ that/ who(当强调主语且主语指人)+ 其他部分”，强 调了主语“my laziness and poor preparation”。故which改为that。

第七处：every day指“每天”的意思，在句子中直接作时间状语。故去掉on。

第八处：修饰谓语部分“was prepared”要用副词。故full改为fully。

第九处：be convinced that是固定句式，指“相信、确信、承认某事”。句意：由此，我坚信只要我们做好充 分准备，我们就能抓住机会。convincing改为convinced。

第十处：与主句中的主语we相一致，此处也是指“我们”。句意：由此，我坚信只要我们做好充分准备，我 们就能抓住机会。故I改为we。