题目内容
【题目】短文改错
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏词符号(/\),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下面画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1. 每处错误及修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
As the saying goes, chance favored the prepared mind. I learned this from one of my experience. I was not chosen as member of the volleyball team of our school. Because of this, I decided to give up play volleyball. Luckily, my best friend stopped me but pointed out that it was my laziness and poor preparation which led to my failure. After that, I practiced playing volleyball on every day. When another tryout arrived, I was full prepared and tried my best. As a result, I was selected and became an important player on our school team.
From this, I am firmly convincing that we are able to seize a chance as long as I get well prepared.
【答案】
As the saying goes, chance the prepared mind. I learned this from one of my
. I was not chosen as
member of the volleyball team of our school. Because of this, I decided to give up
volleyball. Luckily, my best friend stopped me
pointed out that it was my laziness and poor preparation
led to my failure. After that, I practiced playing volleyball on every day. When another tryout arrived, I was
prepared and tried my best. As a result, I was selected and became an important player on our school team. From this, I am firmly
that we are able to seize a chance as long as
get well prepared.
【解析】
第一处:句意:俗话说,机遇垂青有准备的人。句子的主语chance是单数,所以谓语用单数。故favored 改为favors。
第二处:one of后面跟可数名词的复数形式,指“……之一”。故experience改为experiences。
第三处:此处指“作为校排球队的一员”。故as后加a。
第四处:give up doing…是固定搭配,指“放弃做某事”。故play改为playing。
第五处:前后两句是语意的顺承,并非转折。故but改为and。
第六处:本句运用了强调句型“It is/ was + 被强调部分+ that/ who(当强调主语且主语指人)+ 其他部分”,强 调了主语“my laziness and poor preparation”。故which改为that。
第七处:every day指“每天”的意思,在句子中直接作时间状语。故去掉on。
第八处:修饰谓语部分“was prepared”要用副词。故full改为fully。
第九处:be convinced that是固定句式,指“相信、确信、承认某事”。句意:由此,我坚信只要我们做好充 分准备,我们就能抓住机会。convincing改为convinced。
第十处:与主句中的主语we相一致,此处也是指“我们”。句意:由此,我坚信只要我们做好充分准备,我 们就能抓住机会。故I改为we。