Question

【题目】 短文改错

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处，每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：

1. 每处错误及其修改均限一词；

2. 只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

The other day, I take part in the National English Debating Competition. I have a lot to share with you. At first, I feel really delighted what I’ve won the first prize in the competition, which makes me understood the true meaning of the proverb ＂no pains, no gains.＂ Furthermore, in the five-days competition, I established a closely friendship with students from all over the country, from who I’ve learned a great deal. More importantly, taking this competition have enabled me overcome my fear of speaking in the public, thus developing my self-confidence. Additionally, I owe many thanks for my teacher and the judges, without whose help, I couldn’t have done such an excellent job.

Answer 1

【答案】

The other day, I part in the National English Debating Competition. I have a lot to share with you. At first, I feel really delighted I’ve won the first prize in the competition, which makes me the true meaning of the proverb ＂no pains, no gains.＂ Furthermore, in the competition, I established a friendship with students from all over the country, from I’ve learned a great deal. More importantly, taking this competition enabled me overcome my fear of speaking in the public, thus developing my self-confidence. Additionally, I owe many thanks my teacher and the judges, without whose help, I couldn’t have done such an excellent job.

【解析】

第一处：take→took 由于前面时间状语是the other day，所以谓语动词应用一般过去时。故take 改为took。

第二处：what→that或去掉what delighted后面是宾语从句，宾语从句是完整的，用that引导，或省略that。故what改成that或去掉what。

第三处：understood→understand 考查＂make+宾语+宾语补足语＂结构，此处me和understand是主动关系，使用省略to的动词不定式。故understood改成understand。

第四处：five-days→five-day ＂数词+名词＂构成的复合形容词中，名词不能用复数。故five-days改成five-day。

第五处：closely→close 修饰名词friendship用形容词，故closely改成close。

第六处：who→whom 考查非限制性定语从句。先行词是students，指人，定语从句用＂介词from+关系代词whom＂引导。故who改成whom。

第七处：have→has 这句话的主语是动名词，谓语用单数。故have改成has。

第八处：me后面加to enable sb. to do sth.使某人能够做某事，为固定用法。故me后面加to。

第九处：去掉the in public是固定短语，意为＂在公共场合＂。故去掉the。

第十处：for→to owe one’s thanks to是固定短语，意为＂向某人表示感谢＂。故for改成to。