Question

【题目】短文改错

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：

1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

When I was a child, I spent more than ten years learn the violin. Therefore, I couldn’t understand ＂real music＂. After I graduated at high school, a friend of mine suggested that we started to learn the guitar because we all thought it was cool. I will never forget the day on that we went to buy guitars in the guitar store. There he saw a guitar player playing the guitar, which I really enjoyed. He became my the first guitar teacher. It took me such a long time choose a guitar among several wonderful model. Now the guitar is the most importantly part of my life and I practice it every day.

Answer 1

【答案】

When I was a child, I spent more than ten years the violin. , I couldn’t understand ＂real music＂. After I graduated high school, a friend of mine suggested that we to learn the guitar because we all thought it was cool. I will never forget the day on we went to buy guitars in the guitar store. There saw a guitar player playing the guitar, which I really enjoyed. He became my first guitar teacher. It took me such a long time choose a guitar among several wonderful . Now the guitar is the most part of my life and I practice it every day.

【解析】

第一处：learn→ learning 根据spend sth. (in) doing sth.结构，应将learn改为learning。

第二处：Therefore→ However 我花了十多年的时间学习小提琴，却不能理解什么是＂真正的音乐＂。上下文之间存在转折关系，且有逗号隔开，应使用副词However。

第三处：at→ from 介词from才是graduate的习惯搭配，graduate from意为＂从……毕业＂ 。

第四处：started→ start 动词suggest表示＂建议＂时，其后的宾语从句要用＂should+动词原形＂表示虚拟，should可以省略，故将started改为start。

第五处：that→ which ＂介词+which＂引导定语从句，on which在从句中作时间状语，相当于when。

第六处：he→ I 人称代词的逻辑错误。此处表示我看到一个人在弹吉他，故将he改成I。

第七处：去掉the 前有物主代词my，则序数词前无需定冠词the。

第八处：choose前加to It takes sb. some time to do sth.是固定句型，表示＂某人做某事需要花费多少时间＂，其中it是形式主语，不定式短语是真正的主语。

第九处：model→ models several（几个，若干）后接名词复数。

第十处：importantly→ important 形容词修饰名词，故应将importantly改为important。