题目内容
【题目】 短文改错(共10小题;每小题l分,满分10分)
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:
1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Living in the city, people have certain widely acknowledging advantages. They enjoy various entertainments. Besides, there are many culture activities. Also, people in the city had access to better information service and educational facilities, and many problems exist. The overcrowded population, traffic jam and other issues may resulted in nervousness and diseases. As for the country life, the first feeling crowding our minds are peace and quiet. In the countryside, people live quiet life. They are exposed to less noises and pollution. The air in the countryside is a lot of fresher than that in the city. Of course, life in the countryside is not perfect, too.
【答案】
Living in the city, people have certain widely advantages. They enjoy various entertainments. Besides, there are many activities. Also, people in the city access to better information service and educational facilities, many problems exist. The overcrowded population, traffic jam and other issues may in nervousness and diseases. As for the country life, the first feeling crowding our minds peace and quiet. In the countryside, people live quiet life. They are exposed to less and pollution. The air in the countryside is a lot fresher than that in the city. Of course, life in the countryside is not perfect, .
【解析】
第一处: acknowledging→acknowledged。居住在城市的人有一些公认的优势。此处非谓语动词作前置定语,
修饰advantages, acknowledge"承认"与被修饰词之间是动宾关系,故用过去分词作定语。
第二处:culture→cultural。此外,还有很多文化活动。"文化活动"应用cultural activities表示。
第三处:had→have。城市居民能使用更好的信息服务和教育设施。本文的基本时态是现在时,且此处描述一般
的客观情况,亦应用一般现在时。
第四处:and→but。前面提到城市生活的好处,后面提到存在问题,前后是转折关系,故用转折连词but。
第五处:resulted→result。情态动词后面使用动词原形,故应把resulted改为result。
第六处:are→is。涌入我们脑海的第一感觉就是平和和安宁。主语是the first feeling,故谓语用单数形式。
第七处:live后加a。在乡村,人们过着宁静的生活。live a... life"过着……的生活"。
第八处:noises→noise。前面的修饰语是less, less的原级是little,little表示"少"时修饰不可数名词,故用noise。
第九处:去掉of。本句中用了比较结构,fresh的比较级是fresher,其前可用a lot来修饰。而a lot of后需跟名词,
故of多余。
第十处:too→either。当然,乡村生活也不是完美的。在否定句中,应该用either表示"也",不能用too或as well。