Question

随着我市创卫工作的不断推进，盐城已成为一个具有现代化气息的城市, 它吸引着许多游客来此旅游、投资、学习。展示盐城人民的精神风貌是每一位盐城人的职责。请以  “To Be Lovely Yanchengnese为题写一篇短文。
要点如下：
社会公德 (如：主动让座、遵守交通规则、助人为乐)
环境保护 (如：保护花草树木、节约能源)
公共礼仪 (如：在公共场所不抽烟、不大声喧哗、不乱扔垃圾)
作为学生，我们应该……（不少于两点）
参考词语：遵守交通规则 obey the traffic rules, 花草树木 plants and trees
注意：不要逐句翻译以上要点，可适当发挥。
词数： 80左右，标点符号不占格。文章开头已给出，不计入词总数。
To Be Lovely Yanchengnese
Yancheng is developing quickly. It has become a modern city. To be lovely Yanchengnese, we should try our best to show its beauty. We should
 
 
 

Answer 1

To Be Lovely Yanchengnese
Yancheng is developing quickly. It has become a modern city. To be lovely Yanchengnese, we should try our best to show its beauty. We should o anything from ourselves ,such as not waste water or electic power and so on.  As middle school students,we can also do a lot of helpful things. For example,we can protect it by not throwing rubbish away. We can use materials which do no harm to the enviornment.Besides it, we should persuade people joining us as much as posible. If everyone can do this our world will be more beatiful and tomorrow is another day.
Let's do our best to make our city more and more beautiful.

试题分析：这是一篇话题作文。本文所给材料比较详细，我们要做的就是用正确的英语把这些内容表达出来。动笔前要认真阅读材料，不可遗漏要点，并适当发挥。根据材料内容可知本文主要是一般现在时态，主语是第一人称，注意时态语时间状语的搭配及主谓一致问题。写作中适当使用连词，注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系。
【亮点说明】这篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少。如：such as；for example；as much as possible；and so on；more and more等等。学习中注意总结，牢记一些固定句式及短语，写作时就可以适当引用，使文章的表达更有逻辑性,更富有条理。