Question

假如你是于伟，请给你的美国朋友Frank写一封email，向他介绍你参加过的或者熟悉的一次有趣的活动，例如：采摘、野餐、郊游、聚会、竞赛、节日等等。内容包括活动的时间、地点、人物、活动期间的所做、所见、所感，然后向你的笔友发出邀请，请他来参加暑期中的另一次活动。
要求：1. 邮件要包括以上要点，鼓励适当发挥，是内容连贯、生动有趣。
2.词数100左右。邮件的开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数。
请将答案填写在答题卡指定位置。
词汇提示（仅供参考）：
strawberry（cherry，fig）-picking 草莓（樱桃、无花果）采摘      ripe 成熟的
greenhouse 温室     practice base 实践基地      ladder 梯子，rope 绳子，tie 捆住

Answer 1

Dear Frank,
How’s everything going?
Last weekend, I went to climb a mountain with my best friends. We had a picnic by the side of the mountain.
We sat on the blanket we took and ate the food we bought. We lay on the grass,listening to music and singing together happily.The sky was blue,the air was fresh and the mountain was green. We enjoyed the beautiful nature happily. In the end,we took all the waste down the mountain.
Dear Frank! In this summer vacation,we plan to go fishing by the seaside. Would you like to join us? If you come, I’m sure you’ll love it and enjoy yourself. Waiting for your reply.
Best wishes.
Yours truly,
Yu Wei

试题分析：这是一封于伟写给美国朋友Frank的书信，信中介绍了上个周末，于伟和他的朋友去爬山而且还进行了野炊，他们欣赏着美景，玩得很开心。然后向Frank发出邀请，请他来参加暑期中去海边钓鱼的活动。作文包含了所有要求，而且有适当发挥。
【亮点说明】这篇作文写得不错，语句连贯，发挥得当，而且还用到了几个优美的句子。例如：We sat on the blanket we took and ate the food we bought. 句中用到了定语从句。In the end,we took all the waste down the mountain.作者很有环保意识。If you come, I’m sure you’ll love it and enjoy yourself.句子结构较复杂，但表达正确。这为作文增添了不少色彩。