Question

根据提示，写一篇50字左右的短文；短文须包括所有内容要点, 要求语句通顺、意思连贯。
要点如下：
Kitty来自南京，现在和家人住在江阴。
今年11岁，在7年级1班。
留长发，不戴眼镜。
跳舞跳得很好，是舞蹈俱乐部的成员。
非常善良，同学们非常喜欢她。
                                                                                       
                                                                                       
                                                                                       
                                                                                       
                                                                                       

Answer 1

One possible version:
Kitty is from Nanjing. Now she lives in Jiangyin with her family. She is 11 years old. She is in Class 1, Grade 7. She has long hair and doesn’t wear glasses. She dances well. She is a member of the Dancing Club. She is very kind. Her classmates like her very much. .

试题分析：这是一篇提纲类作文，介绍个人情况。本题给出的材料较为详细。动笔前要先认真阅读要点，然后围绕要点适当发挥。注意时态与时间状语的搭配问题，然后组织成文。注意叙述的条理性，适当使用连接词。
【亮点说明】这篇短文使用了大量的固定句式，在叙述中使用连接词，使叙述逻辑更为合理，层次更加分明，为文章增色不少.如: is from +地点。来自哪里，very much,非常等,学习中注意总结,牢记一些固定句式及短语,写作时就可以适当引用,使文章的表达更有逻辑性,更富有条理.