题目内容
根据汉语提示及要求,以Li Ming’s plan in the future 为题, 用英语写一篇80词左右的短文。提示:1.Li Ming 是一名中学生,学习努力,高中毕业后想去北京上大学;
2.他长大后想当一名记者;
3 他打算给报纸、杂志写文章;
4 他希望将来环游世界
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2.他长大后想当一名记者;
3 他打算给报纸、杂志写文章;
4 他希望将来环游世界
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LiMing is middle school student. He works very hard. When he graduates from high school, he is going to college in BeiJing. He wants to be a reporter when he grows up and writes to the newspapers. He wishes he could travel around the world one day.
试题分析:这是一篇给材料作文,本文已经给出了主要写作要点,动笔前要先认真阅读要点,然后围绕要点适当发挥。写作中,应注意描述的全面性,尽量将提示的内容利用上;结合材料内容,可知本文主要用第三人称,一般现在时态进行叙述,注意主谓一致问题。注意语言的表述应该符合语法的结构,造句应该符合英语的表达习惯。适当使用连词,做到上下文联系紧密,符合逻辑关系。
【亮点说明】这篇短文使用的句式短语较为简单.如work hard努力学习;grow up长大邓。但是通过一些连词,如:and等的使用,使得文章避免单纯的重复,使得短文既通俗易懂又逻辑清楚。让我们对简这个人有了一个比较全面的了解,不失为一篇上等作文。
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