Question

假如你是一名产品推销员，你是如何推销你的产品呢？请根据下面提示的内容，用80 次左右的短文向你的顾客介绍你的产品————毛衣。（sweater）
产地---- 上海   面料----羊毛（wool）价格 120—150元件     用途---保暖
特点---柔软(soft)、舒适(comfortable)、各种颜色、各种尺寸大小齐全、样式时尚
作文：（15分）
Please come and buy the sweater.
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Answer 1

Please come and buy the sweater. The sweater is made in Shanghai. And it is made of wool. So it is soft and comfortable. If you are afraid of the cold weather in winter, just come here and buy one. It can help you have a warm winter. The sweaters have all kinds of color and sizes. And the styles are different and very fashion. All of you can choose one that fit you. The price is very low. It’s only between 120 yuan and 150 yuan.

试题分析：这是篇给材料作文。根据题中所给的材料来介绍产品。材料中包含了很多信息，写作前要理清头绪，如何将这些信息很好的组织在一起，并通过正确的语言将其表述清楚。可以适当的使用学过的复杂句子给文章增添色彩。还可使用一些连接词使文章更具逻辑。
【亮点说明】这篇作文紧扣材料，要点完整，并将各要点整理有序，使文章条理清楚。文中用了一些很好的句子和表达方式，如：And it is made of wool.它是由羊毛制成；be made of由……制成。If you are afraid of the cold weather in winter, just come here and buy one如果你害怕冬天寒冷的气候，过来买一件吧。If引导了一个条件状语从句。All of you can choose one that fit you所有人都能找到适合自己的一件毛衣。That引导了定语从句。