Question

请根据下面的提示，介绍一下你和你的朋友Peter外貌、性格等方面的不同，并谈一谈你对朋友的看法，怎样才能能为你的朋友。可适当进行拓展。 词数，80 词左右。
参考词汇： serious, exercise, funny, outgoing

I	Peter
14岁	14岁
高的	矮的
外向，风趣	严肃
运动	阅读，音乐
…	…

Answer 1

My name isTom.I have a good friend,his name is Peter.
Peter is the same age as me.But we are quite diferent in many ways.I am tall,but Peter is shorter than me.I am an outgoing boy .My friends think I am funnyand make make them laugh.but Peter is more serious than me.,he never tells jokes.As for hobbies,I like sports best when I am free.But Peter would like to stay at home to read books and listen to music in his free time.
I think it’s not necessary to be the same.We often help each other and share everything together.

试题分析：这是一篇话题作文。本文所给材料比较详细，我们要做的就是用正确的英语把这些内容表达出来。动笔前要认真阅读材料，不可遗漏要点，并适当发挥。根据材料内容可知本文主要是，主语是第一考o查比较级，下笔时要考虑好比较级的句型注意时态语时间状语的搭配及主谓一致问题。写作中适当使用连词，注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系。
【亮点说明】文中运用了大量比较的内容，使文章结构鲜明内容丰富。先写相同点年龄，运用the same as句型。再着重写不同点，运用许多固定句式，为文章增色不少，如make them laugh,as for ,when I am free,would like to do sth,in sb’s spare time.学习中注意总结,牢记一些固定句式及短语,写作时就可以适当引用,使文章的表达更有逻辑性,更富有条理.