题目内容
【题目】书面表达
童年是快乐、精彩的。七年级的你们即将迎来最后一个儿童节,如果你有一天的假期,你会做什么让自己的最后一个“六一”过得更快乐、难忘?根据表格内容写一篇约60字题为“My plans for Children’s Day”的短文。开头已给出。可适当发挥联想,增加内容。
When | What to do |
In the morning | watch the school talent show … |
In the afternoon | visit a park, have a picnic, … |
In the evening | … |
My plans for Children’s Day
Time flies! Children’s Day is coming soon.________________________________________
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【答案】
My Plans for Children’s Day
Time flies! Children’s Day is coming soon. On Children’s Day, first, I will watch the school talent show in the morning. Then I am going sightseeing.I am going to have a picnic in Haide Park. After the picnic, I am going to a shop to buy clothes. Last, I am going to come home at half past four. In the evening, I will play games online。I will have a good time this day.
【解析】
试题分析:这是一篇材料作文,介绍自己儿童节打算做的3-4件事情。结合所给材料,可知本文主要考查一般将来时态,人称为第一人称。行文中应注意主谓一致问题,句子结构应以简单句为主,注意一些常见句式的应用,比如:I will visit…,I am going to…及I will have…等句式的应用。同时注意运连接词,注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意叙述顺序,符合逻辑关系,注意文后要表达自己将会玩得愉快。
写作亮点: 这篇短文涵盖了题目要求的所有要点内容,表达准确,意思连贯,符合逻辑。在文章的结构组织上多用简单句,文章脉络清晰,自然流畅。同时,文章还使用了一些常用的句式、短语和连接词,这为文章增添了文采和层次感。