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【题目】书面表达

亲爱的同学,在这一年半的初中学习生活中,你一定结交了许多好朋友。请用英语写一篇短文,介绍你的最好朋友——李雷。

写作要点: 1. 他比我高,比我瘦一点,他乐于助人,兴趣广泛;

2. 他成绩优秀,比我更擅长英语学习,经常在英语学习中帮助我;

3. 我比他外向,他很安静,我们都喜欢运动,网球运动中我经常打败他;

4. 他最喜欢肥皂剧,不喜欢新闻和动物世界。

写作要求:

(1) 不可使用真实的姓名和学校名

(2) 可适当加入细节,使内容充实,行文连贯

(3) 字迹工整,语言精练,表达准确,条理清晰

(4) 至少80词

【答案】

One possible version:

I have some friends in school. Li Lei is my best friend.

Li Lei is taller than me, and a little thinner. He has a lot of interests and is always ready to help others. He is a top student. He is hard-working. He is much better at English than me. He often helps me with my English. I am more outgoing than he, he is very quiet. We all like sports, tennis, I often beat him. He likes soap operas, best, but do not like news and animal world. We get on well with each other so we often discuss our study together and he can always find out new ways to help me work out problems. I'm so proud of him.

【解析】

试题分析:这是一篇给材料作文,介绍我最好的朋友李雷。结合所给材料,可知本文主要考查一般现在时态,人称为单数第一,三人称,注意主谓一致问题,句子结构主要为系表结构和动宾结构,注意一些常见句式的应用,比如:Li Lei is ...,He has...,He is ..., I am....,He likes...,等句式的应用。写作中注意运用代词,注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意叙述顺序,符合逻辑关系.

写作亮点:本文结构紧凑,语言简练。开头介绍了我的朋友的名字,接下来介绍李雷的性格,学习,爱好以及我们之间的活动,最后表达我为他感到骄傲。此处be ready to do sth, be better at, help sb with sth, get on well with, find out, heip sb do sth, work out,be proud of等这些词组的运用也让文章增色不少。

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