Question

以为My first DIY job 为题，用英语写一篇短文， 词数90个左右。内容必须包括以下要点，也可适当发挥，但不要逐条翻译。
要点：1. 赶在妈妈生日到来前做了一个生日音乐盒，并对此加以保密以给妈妈一个惊喜；
2. 花了许多时间，在制作期间曾出错；
3. 将一朵真玫瑰粘贴在盒盖上；
4. 打开盒子后妈妈就听到生日歌；
5. 第一次亲手为妈妈做礼物， 妈妈高兴， 你更高兴。
My first DIY job
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Answer 1

One possible version:
My first DIY job
Mum’s birthday was coming, so I decided to make her a birthday music box. I kept this secret, because I wanted to give her a surprise. It took me three hours to make it. During the course of making it, many things went wrong. I sticked a real rose to the cover of the box. After Mum opened the box, she heard the birthday song. This was the first time for me to make a present for Mum with my own hands. Mum was very happy, and I was even happier.

试题分析：本文是材料作文，考生在写作之前必须认真读题，把握写作要求和写作目的。本文要求写My first DIY job，内容是给妈妈做生日礼物的过程。应该用第一人称，时态是一般过去时。写作前最好先列出提纲，写出有关的短语和固定表达备用。最后连起来。
【亮点说明】 本文做到了包含所有内容要点，语句通顺，标点符号运用正确。还恰当地运用了些短语和句式，如It took me three hours to make it ; go wrong等等。并注意了句子开头的变化和的衔接如：so，because and等等。