Question

根据提示写作。(10分)
1．上周六你和同学们去湖边野炊。        2．早上8点公园门口集合，8点半出发(start)。
3．到达时已11点，生火做饭，食物美味。 4．下午，做游戏，打排球，在湖里划船。
5．4点半到家，很累，但玩得开心。       6．希望……

Answer 1

Last Saturday my classmates and I went camping by the lake.We met at the park gate at 8 in the morning and started at 8.We arrived  there at 11 and made a fire.The food was delicious so we like it. In the afternoon,we played games and went boating on the lake.At about 4：30，we went home .We were very tired but had so much fun.We hope we can go caming there again.

试题分析：本题给出大量的信息，包括活动时间、集合时间、出发时间以及返回时间；集合地点、活动地点；活动内容等，注意将这些内容介绍清楚。写作中注意用词准确，逻辑清楚，并注意句子的时态一般用过去式。写作中适当使用连词，做到上下文联系紧密，、条理清楚，符合逻辑关系。
【亮点说明】短文用了一些短语和句式，增加了文章的色彩，如：We met at the park gate at 8 in the morning and started at 8. We were very tired but had so much fun.We hope we can go caming there again.等，短文用了一些连词，使句子的结构复杂化，提醒学生在日常学习中，注意多背诵范文，熟记一些经典句型。