Question

在初中即将毕业之际，请你以张明的名义给英国笔友Brian写一封感谢信，要点提示如下：

三年前	你来到新的班级，没有朋友，感到孤独
三年中	Brian多次给你写信，他在信中： 鼓励你多交朋友； 告诉你学好英语的方法； 和你分享快乐； 你变得......
近年来天津发生很大变化，你邀请他来天津游玩

参考词汇：分享快乐 share happiness
要求：
（1）词数：80~100个
（2）信的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数
（3）要点齐全，行文连贯，可适当发挥
Dear Brian，
How time flies! We have been friends for three years. I’m writing to thank you for your help!
Three years ago,___________________________________________________________________
_________________________________________________________________________________________
_________________________________________________________________________________________
Hope to see you soon!
Yours,
Zhang Ming

Answer 1

One possible version：
Dear Brian，
How time flies! We have been friends for three years. I’m writing to thank you for your help!
Three years ago, I came to a new class, and I had no friends, so I felt lonely.  You wrote to me many times. In your letter, you encouraged me to make more friends and told me how to learn English well. During these three years, you shared happiness with me. And I became happy. In recent years, great changes have happened in Tianjin. Could you come and go on vacation in Tianjin?
Hope to see you soon!
Yours,
Zhang Ming

试题分析：
这是一篇给材料作文，给自己的好友Brain写一封感谢信。结合所给材料，可知本文主要考查一般过去时，人称为第一，二人称，注意主谓一致问题，句子结构主要为系表结构，注意一些常见句式的应用，比如：I came to ......；you encouraged me to......；you shared......；I became ......及Could you come......？等句式的应用。写作中注意运用代词，注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系，注意文后要表达自己想见到好友的愿望。
【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑，语言简练。开头介绍感谢Brain对他的帮助，接下来介绍在这三年他是如何帮助他的，最后邀请Brain到天津来玩。此处用了wrote to ，encouraged me to，make more friends ， shared happiness等这些词组的运用也让文章增色不少。