Question

明天（星期五）全班同学将去参观科学博物馆(the Science Museum)，由你（班长）通知全体同学。（通知的开头和结尾已给出）内容如下：
1.早上8点钟在校门口集合，步行前往。 2．下星期一交一份有关参观的报告。 3．参观时要认真听，仔细看并记下有趣的东西。4．不可在博物馆内大声喧哗及拍照。 5．带笔和笔记本。词数80左右。
参考词汇：上交hand in， 认真听listen carefully， 记下write down，
喧哗make noise， 拍照take pictures， 带上take…with you
Boys and girls,
We are going to visit the Science Museum tomorrow.________________________
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Thank you

Answer 1

One possible version：
Boys and girls,
We are going to visit the Science Museum tomorrow. We will meet at 8 o’clock at the school gate and we will walk there. Don’t forget to take your pen and notebook with you because you have to use them to write down something interesting while visiting. So you had better listen as carefully as you can. A report about the trip must be handed in next Monday. Finally, it’s not allowed to make noise or take photos. Wish a nice trip.
Thank you.

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