Question

某中文网站提出“走路去上学”的倡议，请你就这一话题写一篇约80词的英语短文。
内容提示：1. 走路有利于健康且安全；
2. 和同学结伴可以相互了解，相互帮助；
3. 不需要父母接送，学会自理；
4. 道路上车辆减少，城市不再拥堵；
……
要求：1. 要点齐全，条理清楚，语句通顺，语法正确，书写规范。
2. 文中不得出现真实校名及姓名，否则不予评分。
3. 开头已给出，不计入总词数，可适当发挥。
参考词汇: be good for, each other, send, no longer, crowded
Walking to school is a wonderful way to exercise.                                         
                                                                                   
                                                                                   
                                                                                   
                                                                                   
                                                                                   
                                                                                   

Answer 1

Walking to school is a wonderful way to exercise. I think it's good for health and it's safe. When we walk with our classmates, we can talk about something interesting and know each other better. Also, we can help each other. What's more, if we walk, our parents don't have to send us to school. We can learn to look after ourselves. As a result, there will be fewer cars in the city. Then the streets are no longer crowded.
I hope more and more students will go to school on foot.

试题分析：这是篇命题作文。题中给出了写作的要点，写作时一定要注意要点的齐全，并可适当展开扩充；句子之间可加入一些承接性的句子来加强文章的连贯性和逻辑性。
【亮点分析】这篇文章要点齐全，表达准确流畅。文中用了一些常用的表达方式，如：When we walk with our classmates, we can talk about something interesting and know each other better.当我们和同学一起走路时，我们可以谈论一些有趣的事情并且更好的了解对方。When引导时间状语从句。另外，文中用来一些承接性的句子，如Also 同样；What's more另外；As a result结果是；Then然后。