Question

Ellen 中学毕业后要去澳大利亚读高中，但她担心在陌生的环境里难以交到朋友。因此她给澳大利亚的笔友Andy写信，向他倾诉烦恼。请根据下面这封邮件，以Andy的名义给Ellen回信。
Dear Andy,
How is everything going? I’m excited to tell you that I’m going to study in Australia this September. But I’m a shy girl and don’t know how to make new friends there. What shall I do? Could you give me some advice?
Ellen.
参考词汇：be friendly to, the same hobbies, a good listener, smiling
要求：1. 可适当发挥，但必须包含表格所提供的信息；
2. 词数80~100（短文的开头已给出，不计入总词数）；
3. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名与地名。
Dear Ellen,
I’m glad that you are coming to study in Australia.
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
Andy

Answer 1

Dear Ellen,
I’m glad that you are coming to study in Australia.I know your feeling well.Don’t worry.You should be friendly to everyone.Through this ,I believe,everyone will like you.Then you can should the same hobbies with others. The reason is simple, I believe that ‘the basis of friendship lies in great similarity between two persons’ heart and soul.Be confidence, you just need to show yourself and be yourself. Somebody will like your way of life, your personality.
Hope you find true friends!
Andy

试题分析：这是一篇书信作文，格式已给出。回信内容必须是给Ellen提出建设性的意见，告诉她怎么结交朋友。根据材料内容可知本文主要是一般现在时态，主语是第一人称，注意时态语时间状语的搭配及主谓一致问题。写作中适当使用连词，注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系。
【亮点说明】这篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少。如：插入语I believe的使用；the basis of；need to do sth等等。学习中注意总结,牢记一些固定句式及短语，写作时就可以适当引用，使文章的表达更有逻辑性，更富有条理。