Question

某学校将每年的3月5日定为爱心志愿者活动日，今年活动的主题是“人人为贫困孩子献爱心”。请你以学生会的名义写一份倡议书，内容要点包括：
许多孩子因贫困而上不起学；（too…to…）；
在冬天，很多孩子没有暖的衣服穿。他们没有足够的书籍，没有书包；
有些学校离家很远，每天很早就起床，要花费一个半小时的时间到达学校。（far away, it takes …to do ）；
我们能为他们做的是……（至少2点）。
文章开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。要求60词左右。
Dear students,
In some parts of our country, there are many children out of school.         ______
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Thanks for your joining!
Students’ Union

Answer 1

Dear students,
In some parts of our country, there are many children out of school. They are too poor to go to school. At the same time, they don't have enough school things and clothes. In my opinion, each child should have the right to go to school, but there are few chances for the poor children. So we should help them as possible as we can, just like giving them school things, clothes and so on. We hope they will have the same chance of getting knowledge as we do in the school.
Thanks for your joining!
Students’ Union

试题分析：这是一篇给材料作文。本文所给材料比较详细，我们要做的就是用正确的英语把这些内容表达出来。动笔前要认真阅读材料，不可遗漏要点，并适当发挥。根据材料内容可知本文主要是一般现在时态，主语是第一人称，注意时态语时间状语的搭配及主谓一致问题。写作中适当使用连词，注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系。
【亮点说明】这篇短文进行了较为全面的说明，能用简短的词汇表达出提纲的内容，并且进行了适当的处理，准确的添加自己的观点，同时使用了一些固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少。使文章的表达更有逻辑性,更富有条理。