Question

【题目】发动你的五种感官，描述一个小动物或者一种物品，写一篇不少于5句话的作文。要求字迹清楚、用词准确。

Answer 1

【答案】

I have a lovely dog. Its name is YoYo. I like it very much. It has two big ears, two big and bright eyes. Its hair is brown. It has come to my home for a year. It has become a part of my family. It has its own house, but it likes to sleep under my bed.

【解析】本文要求通过感官描写动物或者物品，作者从眼睛看到的外貌特征来写，首先以I have a lovely dog.开头引领全文，接着从它的名字、耳朵、眼睛、毛发描写了狗狗的外形，然后点明狗狗在我们家的地位：家庭成员之一。最后描述了狗狗的一个习惯：喜欢睡在我的床底下。句子结构较为简单，语言简练，描写通顺连贯，很好地写出了一只可爱的狗狗，是一篇不错的文章。