Question

【题目】书面表达。

以The Earth is sick!为题完成小作文

The Earth is sick

The Earth was clean and beautiful．

Now some parts are

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Answer 1

【答案】TheEarthissick

ThereisairandwaterontheEarth.People,wildanimals,insectsandplantsliveontheEarth.Manyyearsago,theEarthwas cleanandbeautiful.Today,wehaveairpollution,waterpollutionandlandpollution.Peoplearecutti

ngdowntheforeststobuildfactoriesandhouses.Theymuststopcuttingdowntheforests.Peoplearekillinganimalstogetmeatandskins.Theymuststopkillinganimals.TheEarthisverysick.WemustsavetheEarth.

【解析】

这是一篇看图作文，根据所给的题目和图片写作文，时态主要用一般现在时和一般过去时，描写了地球以前与现在的样子，形成鲜明的对比，然后提出建议保护地球。通篇语句通顺，中心明确，最后点明主题，与题目相呼应，是一篇精彩的文章。