8. will → would.
7. you read → you to read. would you like其后加不定式。
6. will → would.
5. had dove → had dived.
4. leave → let.
3. raises above → rises above, raise是及物动词, rise是不及物动词。
2. reach at → reach, reach是及物动词。
1. had chose → had chosen.
10. My father mustn’t have said such a thing.
注 释
9. I hope you can visit my country soon, because I’d to show you some beautiful places near my home.