7.钓鱼之道:精于垂钓者都知道,假如有大鱼上钩,硬把鱼往岸上拖是很糟糕的事。其结果,不是钓线被扯断、鱼钩被拉直,就是鱼嘴被撕裂,这时,本已上钩的鱼也会逃走。正确的做法是,当大鱼上钩,钓者对于鱼的挣扎,应该有一个合理的迁就。这时的钓线,应该放得较长,任由鱼拖着跑,等鱼累了,再慢慢收线;如果鱼再一次挣扎,钓者也再一次放线,鱼累了,再收。几个回合下来,鱼往往会精疲力尽,任由钓者拖上岸。生活中,我们也常常被一条无形的线拉紧,于是你挣扎,奔突,拼尽全力,但结果,却无异于自杀。有时候,你休息一会,打个盹儿,醒来,体力和精力得以恢复,突然奋力一搏,反而往往会收到意想不到的效果--这时,也许,你便会像那条绷断钓线的大鱼一样,自由了。 8.马哈鱼:非洲大陆四周的广阔海域中,生活着一种大马哈鱼。它的孩子出生以后,最先得到的食物却是自己生身母亲的肉体。它们的母亲在自己孩子吮吸和撕咬自己的血肉时,只是极其痛苦地在海水里翻腾,却从不作出丝毫的反抗。大马哈鱼为了孩子的成长,只能在众多孩子的撕咬之下,使自己的一具骨骸沉于海底……大马哈鱼对孩子的爱,到了无以复加的地步;而孩子对母亲的残忍,岂不也同样达到了无以复加的地步?

★★现实人物类★★

开头段等同与漫画作文,也可借用议论性作文

(pie chart饼图 /bar chart柱形图)

中间段等同与议论性作文。第一种情况时候可借鉴漫画作文中给与的一些句子。

结尾段与前两者类似。

作文须知:

避免低级错误(动词的使用、30% of the students、there be结构句式)

有效连接(注意连接词的使用,例如:in addition, besides, furthermore, moreover, in fact, after all, on the other hand, to be honest, in contrast, that is, that is to say, in other words,等等)

句式复杂(长短句搭配使用,尽量使用各类从句,强调句,倒装句虚拟语气等。比如,文章结尾Only by this way can we要实现的目标.)

语言地道(切忌生硬的将中文翻译成英文,用英语思考)

卷面整洁

一些有用的连接词

(1)表选择关系或对等关系的连接词:either…or…,neither…nor, or, as well as…, and, both…and…。

(2)表因果关系或对等关系的连接词:therefore, so, as a result, as the result of …,because of, due to …,owing to, thanks to等。

(3)表时间顺序的连接词:the moment, as soon as, at first, then, later, meanwhile, at the beginning, in the end, before long, for the first(second…)time, the minute等。

(4)表转折关系的连接词:yet, and yet, but , while, on the contrary, on the other hand, however, at the same time(然而)等。

(5)表解释说明的连接词:that is, that is to say, in other words, such as, for instance, and so on, etc. and the like等。

(6)表递进关系的连接词:not only…but (also), what’s more, what's worse, besides, in addition, worse still, moreover, above all等。

(7)表示总结的连接词:in a word, on the whole, in short, briefly, in brief, to sum up, in all, to conclude, in conclusion,等。

(8)表示让步的连接词:though/although, in spite of, even if/ even though, no matter+疑问句,whatever/however/whoever

开始段:总述。(两三句话)

Nowadays, there is a widespread concern over (the issue that)…

(目前,……引起了广泛的关注。)

There is no denying that… (不可否认,……)

It is universally acknowledged that … (……是大家所公认的。)

be closely related to(与……息息相关)

Pose a great threat to … (对...造成一大威胁)

It goes without saying that… (毫无疑问,……)

There are at least two good reasons accounting for …

(至少有两个原因能解释这个现象)

中间段(分两种情况):

(1)解释产生这种现象的原因或意义,并做出一定分析。

There are at least two good reasons accounting for __. On the one hand, __. On the other hand, __ is due to the fact that __. In addition, __ is responsible for __.Maybe there are some other reasons to show __.But it is generally believed that the above mentioned reasons are commonly convincing.

(2)描述不同人群的观点

It is well known that the opinion concerning this hot topic varies from person to person. A majority of people think that _ 观点一__. In their views there are two factors contributing to this attitude as follows: in the first place, ___原因一___.Furthermore, in the second place, ___原因二___. So it goes without saying that __观点一__.

People, however, differ in their opinions on this matter. Some people hold the idea that __观点二__. In their point of view, on the one hand, __原因一__. On the other hand, __原因二__. Therefore, there is no doubt that __观点二__.

结尾段:提出建议或总结观点或表明态度。(三四句话)

As far as I am concerned, I hold the point of view that __. Only by this way/doing so can we要实现的目标. / On no account can we __.

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