1. 内容完整，语句流畅，无语法错误，书写规范，给9-10分；

4、注意字数，语法，拼写等，避免错误。

下面是两个例文，大家可以参考一下。

One possible version:

The environment is becoming worse and worse. There are many kinds of pollution I worry about. The most serious two are water pollution and air pollution, because people can't live healthily with dirty water and polluted air, nor can animals. More and more diseases are caused by polluted air.

I think factories should not pour dirty water into the river directly or produce more waste gas. We'd better go on foot or by like instead of by car, because more cars mean more waste gas. We should make our world more and more beautiful.

Another possible version:

The first fact I worry about is noise pollution. People can't sleep well if there is too much noise. That's why so many people prefer to live in the countryside rather than live in the noisy city. I suggest all the factories and cars shouldn't make terrible noises. If they make terrible noise that isn't allowed, they will be fined, and we can also produce the cars which can't make terrible noise.

The other pollution is rubbish pollution. If everyone makes so much rubbish, one day we may live in a world filled with rubbish. Some people throw the waste paper about. I suggest rubbish should be put into different kinds of dustbins or paper bags.

下面，我们来看看这道题的评分标准。一般来说，各地的评分标准都和下面的这个标准差不多。这个最高的标准，实际上也就是我们写作的目标。

评分标准：

3、结合所给的提示。提示中，对每种污染都进行了阐述，考生可以这些描述进行写作。

2、题意要求的是阐述个人的观点-最担忧的两种情形。而不是对图片进行描述。

1.认真读题。注意，题目虽然给了四幅图，但是却只要求写其中的两个就行。

2.写作从图画的细节出发。所谓细节，就是指图画中的人物、事件、地点、环境、时间、动作等。依据图画细节，就可以把图画的内容用英语具体而生动地表达出来了。

例题分析(例题)

同学们，看到下面的四幅图片及相应的报道后，你感到最担忧的是哪两种情形？请简述你担忧的理由并提出建议或希望。

要求：

⒈ 从所给素材中任选两种情形进行阐述，不可多选或少选。

⒉ 条理清楚，意思连贯，语句通顺，标点正确；

⒊ 词数 80 - 100。

参考词汇： 建议 suggest v. suggestion n.

气体 gas n.　 污染 pollution n.

THE POLLUTIONS

① One third of the world's people don't have enough clean water.

② More and more diseases are caused by polluted air.

③ People are disturbed quite often by kinds of noises.

④ Every person in our city makes about 1.8 kilos of rubbish every day.

这道看图作文题，主题和图片连接得不是很紧密。从考查的形式上来说，虽是看图，实质上却属于提示性的作文。这个作文应该结合个人的观点，选择的余地还是很大的。做这个题应该注意几个方面：

1、结合文字提示，正确理解图意。一般情况下，看图作文在提供图画的同时也附带有简要的文字提示，我们可以利用文字提示去正确地理解图意，得到要点。切忌孤立地看图而忽视文字提示。

18、中心句: 祈使句，感叹句,

　Please keep the place clean and tidy.

　Don't throw rubbish onto the ground.

　Let's plant more flowers and trees.

　 We must pick up some rubbish and throw it into a dustbin.

　 We should not spit in a public place/ cut down the trees

　 We should do more exercise.

　 I'm allowed to sleep late on weekends.

　 I'm not allowed to stay outside in the night.

　 We can't go to sleep too late.

　 Let's meet at the bus stop at half past five.

　 On the Spring Festival Eve people have a big dinner. They have a lot of nice food to eat.

　 During the Spring Festival people have a lot of interesting to do.

　 People visit their relatives and friends

　 They greet each other with a hug and say, "Happy New Year".

　 English is very important and I like English very much.

　 When I was eight, I wanted to go to a famous college.

　 From now on I'll work harder than before.

　 We visited a lot of places of interest.

　 We bought a lot of things. The clothes there are good and cheap.

　 The match is very exciting .

　 Class One won this match. Class Two got lost.

　 I like pandas best. = My favorite animals are pandas.

　 They thanked me a lot.

　 I hope she'll be better soon.

　 We also have some special interest groups, such as drawing, singing and dancing.

　 We hope to spend more time on sports.

　 It comes in January or February .

17、结束句

　If everyone makes contribution to protecting the environment, the world will become much more beautiful.

　I think it is important to protect animals.

　I hope my dream will come true in the future.

　I hope every day can be Spring Festival.

　I thought I would never forget this trip.

　We enjoyed ourselves. = We had fun. =We had a good time.

　What a happy trip!

　How happy we are! I love this trip very much.

　In fact, I have never seen such an exciting match before.

　I will never forget this match.

　Please send me an e-mail soon. Please write to me soon.

16、开头句

　It's our duty to protect our environment.

　It is very important to keep healthy.

　My favorite holiday is Spring Festival.

　In China the most important holiday is the Spring Festival.

　Everyone has his dreams. So do I. My dream is to be a famous doctor.

　I want to be a businessman/bob.

　Last Sunday, it was sunny(rainy, windy, foggy,).

　Last summer, my parents and I went to Beijing for our holidays.

　Last Sunday, Class One had a football match with Class Two. All of us went to watch it.

　I' like to tell you something about the out- of-class activity in our school. We usually have activities from 4:50 -- 5:50 in the afternoon.

　I'm glad/happy to hear your good news! If you come to Canada, I will be very excited.

　I'd like to invite you to my birthday party.

　Thank you for your invitation.

　Thank you for inviting me to your party.