假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的一篇作文。文　中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词；

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉；

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出改正后的词。

注意：1、每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

      2、只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

  I very sympathize with you and the great trouble you are suffering.I suggest you to

Communicate your trouble to your teachers and classmates so as to get help from them..

You are not supposing to think about your exams all the time,that only makes you more

stressed out. Somehow, your should think about the progress you made in your study.

That will surely increase your confidence.In addition, I suggest you to doing more exercise in your

spare time to relieve your stress because sports will too help better at night.As for me, I

would like to listen to classic music If  I have time.

     I wish you will get out of your trouble.

 基础写作(共1小题，满分15分)
【写作情景】
假如你是李明，你跟你的朋友Paul聊天，他表示学习压力很大，请你给他写封信，给他提一些建议。
【写作内容】
将自己的问题告诉老师和同学，请求得到他们的帮助。
不要总想着考试成绩，要多想想自己在哪些方面进步了，这样就会给自己自信。
多做运动，运动可以帮助自己缓解压力，并且有助于睡眠。
你对他的祝福。
【写作要求】
用五句话表达全部的内容，并组成一篇连贯的短文。（信的开头和结尾已给出，不计入句数。）
【评分标准】
句子结构准确，信息内容完整，篇章结构连贯。
Dear Paul,
I quite sympathize with you and understand the great trouble you are suffering from.
…
Yours sincerely,
Li Ming

It was one of the happiest Saturday mornings I had spent with my daughter, Gigi. That was, until two strangers threw her into their car and sped away. It seemed like a bad dream.I could ____ speak when the police questioned me.

After that, the policeman asked me to go home to wait. My friend Gloria came to? ____me. She took my hand and gave me?? ____. It was a picture of a little girl? ____asleep in her bed, standing by the bed was a tall, blond(金发的)__ __.? We prayed and waited by the phone until sunset. The ____ never rang.

Suddenly，the front door swung open. I looked up and ____. There stood Gigi. I cried, throwing my ____ around her. Gigi said：“I was scared. We were going really fast on an old ____ road I'd never seen before. But then a tall man walked out ____ the car，and they ran off the road and hit a tree. Then the tall man ____ the car door and pulled me out. He was really nice，and said I would be okay. I must have gone to ____， because when I woke up it is in front of our house. He must have brought me home.” “But who...how did he know..., where to bring you？”My voice broke. Gigi ____ her head. Just then Gigi noticed Gloria's picture. “That's him！” she ____ at the picture. “Mommy，that's the man who pulled me out of the car！” Gloria and I turned ____. “Are you sure that's the man？” Gloria asked. “Yeah, that's him ____ that he didn't have wings，and he was wearing blue jeans.”

Later that night, the police found the____kidnappers. When questioned, the driver remembered turning away to ____ hitting a tall blond man.

Twenty years have gone by. We have never heard from any one claiming to have?? ____Gigi. There have been no logical explanations for her ____. But from that day on, I believe that all experiences, positive and negative, are given to us for our strengthening and learning.

1.A. hardly??????????? B. hard??????????? C. fully???????????? ????????????? D. full

2.A. sympathize??????? B. support????????? C. comfort????????? D. calm

3.A. a map??????????? B. a picture???????? C. a bag???????????? D. a book

4.A. healthy?????????? B. sound??????????? C. reliable????????? D. reasonable

5.A. angel???????????? B. man???????????? C. maid???????????? D. servant

6.A. phone??????????? B. door bell???????? C. clock???????????? D. radio

7.A. yelled???????????? B. screamed??????? C. whistled????????? D. whispered

8.A. cheeks??????????? B. shoulders???????? C. arms???????????? D. hands

9.A. rocky???????????? B. smooth?????????? C. hard???????????? D. flat

10.A. in back of??????? B. at the bottom of??? C. on the top of?????? D. in front of

11.A. shut???????????? B. fastened????????? C. opened??????????? D. loosened

12.A. rest???????????? B. sleep???????????? C. break???????????? D. yawn

13.A. shook?????????? B. nodded?????????? C. rolled???????????? D. trembled

14.A. referred???????? B. aimed??????????? C. pointed??????????? D. signaled

15.A. sun?burnt?????? B. light???????????? C. weak????????????? D. pale

16.A. rather than?????? B. including???????? C. except??????????? D. other than

17.A. injured????????? B. dead???????????? C. harmed?????????? D. hurt

18.A. stop???????????? B. avoid???????????? C. forbid?????????? D. keep

19.A. released????????? B. relieved????????? C. delivered???????? D. rescued

20.A. escape?????????? B. breakout???????? C. disappearance????? D. flow

假如你是李明，你跟你的朋友Paul聊天，他表示学习压力很大，请你给他写封信，给他提一些建议。

【写作要求】

1．将自己的问题告诉老师和同学，请求得到他们的帮助。

2．不要总想着考试成绩，要多想想自己在哪些方面进步了，这样就会给自己自信。

3．多做运动，运动可以帮助自己缓解压力，并且有助于睡眠。

4．你对他的祝福。

注意：词数120左右。

Dear Paul,

I quite sympathize （同情） with you and understand the great trouble you are suffering

from.                                                                                   

Yours sincerely,

Li Ming

第二节：书面表达（满分25分）

假如你是李明：你的班里来了一位英国交换生Paul。他在和你的交谈中表示在中国学习压力很大。请你给他写封信，给他提一些建议。主要包括以下内容：

1．请求老师和同学的帮助

2．不要总想着考试成绩．要多想自己的进步

3．多做运动  4．．．．．．．

注意：1．词数: 100字左右；       2．可适当加入细节，以使行文连贯；   

3．信的开头已为你写好（不计入总词数）。

Dear Paul，

I quite sympathize with you and understand the great trouble you are suffering from.

_______________________________________________________________________________

_______________________________________________________________________________

Best wishes!

Yours sincerely,

Li Ming