文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在此处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一个横线，并在其下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从十一处起）不计分。
All of us know the old saying “Practice make perfect．” It tells us unless we want to realize our aim, we should practise, and one day we will make it．It’s easy to understand．Once I wanted to learn swimming．At first I found difficult to control my body．I just sank into the water．I feel very frightened．Then I watched others who were good at them and asked them the key to succeed．I went to the swimming pool every day, learned from them and practised．A day, when my friend pushed me into the swimming poo1, I sudden found that I could swim．How exciting I was! Now I can swim much more better than before．

文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删           除或修改。
增加：在此处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出修改的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在其下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从十一处起）不计分。
Ten years ago, I had worked as a night guard in a factory. On a rainy night, all the lights of factory went out all of a sudden. I rushed out and could see nothing. Lucky for me, the warning system was directly connected with the police station. Three or four minutes late, four police car arrived at the front gate. They searched for the factory carefully, tried to find something unusual. In the end, I am told that the rain had brought about the short circuit, that caused the accident.

假如你叫李华,给你的美国笔友Tom写一封100词左右的信,谈谈你去狮子山
旅游的事情。内容要点如下:
1. 前不久和三个朋友游览狮子山；
2. 山顶有庙,稍南有元代著名学者之墓,墓碑上的字难以辨认；
3. 山坡上有很多松树,据说其中的两棵松树有500多年的历史；
4. 傍晚下山回家,大脑中留下了美好的回忆。
注意:1. 参考词汇:  Mount Lion狮子山；scholar学者；tomb-stone墓碑；
2. 首尾句已经给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Tom,
     I was so pleased to hear from you and am writing to tell you something about my visit to Mount Lion.
__________________________________________________________________
 
I really hope that one day you can visit Mount Lion with us.
       Best wishes！
  Yours,LiHua.

第二节短文改错（共10小题，每小题1.5分，满分15分）
文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在此处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出修改的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在其下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从十一处起）不计分。
My classmate, Hanks, have been sick in hospital for a week. Yesterday our class
decided send him some flowers and asked me to buy the flowers. I have had a hard time get them since then. I went to town immediate after class yesterday afternoon only to find the flowers shop there already closed. So I returned with nothing. I called it many times at this morning, but the line was always busy. While I finally got through at noon, a lady said she was a new hand and can not tell me the prices. Luckily, I haven’t classes this afternoon, and I am about go to town again. I must get the flowers for Hanks today.  

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改l0处，多者(从第ll处起)不计分。
Modern technology takes us a lot of convenience, especially when it came to the Internet. You can find all kinds messages in just a few minutes on the Internet. It’s like going to a huge library without have to walk around ti find your books. Therefore,recently many people have been discussing the dangers of the Internet.There have been reports in the America about some people trying to steal others personal information for bad purposes. Finding information on the Net is easy,but not all information are good to society. For example ,you can find such information on how to kill people,how to break into a bank, many things like that．I’m afraid the problem will becomoe more seriously in the future.