答案与简析：

　　76. famous前加上a。 （名词数）。 77. 正确 78. we前面加when，引导一个时间状语从句。（句子成分多分析） 79. them→us （逻辑错误须关注） 80. visiting→visited（非谓动词细辨别） 81. picture→pictures（名词数） 82. passes→passed（动词形） 83. 去掉down（习惯用法要记住） 84. and→but（but, and, or和so） 85. 去掉at（句子成分多分析 / 习惯用法要记住）。

 (一)

Most families in China hoped their single children will          76．_______

have a happy future, so they are very strict in their children.  77．_______

So do teachers in schools! Many children are given so much       78．_______

homework that they have hardly any spare time have sports.       79．_______

The children are forbidden to do anything but to study. No       80．_______

wonder so many children are tired of lessons. Some even          81．_______

attack or kill his parents and teachers! I believe many people   82．_______

already read this kind of news in newspapers or magazines.       83．_______

Shouldn't we draw lesson from the accidents? Now our             84．_______

government is making out a plan to solve the education problems. 85．_______

第二卷

注意事项：

  1答题前，考生先在答题卡上用直径0．5毫米黑色墨水签字笔将自己的姓名、准考

    证号填写清楚，然后贴好条形码。请认真核准条形码上的准考证号、姓名和科目；

  2第二卷共2页，请用直径0．5毫米黑色墨水签字笔在答题卡上各题的答题区域

    内作答，在试题卷上作答无效。

第四部分写作(共两节，满分35分)

第一节短文改错(共l0小题；每小题l分，满分l0分)

    (注意：在试题卷上作答无效)

    此题要求改正所给短文中的错误。对标有题号的每一行作出判断：如无错误，在该

行右边横线上画一个勾(√)；如有错误(每行只有一个错误)，则按下列情况改正：

    此行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线()划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用

斜线划掉。

    此行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(/)，在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。

    此行错一个词：在错的词下划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。

    注意：原行没有错的不要改。

It was a chance of a lifetime to win the first         76_______

prize on the Story Writing Show. All I had to do       77_______

was to write a story or present it. My teachers        78_______

have been telling me how great my writing was.         79_______

So if they had said was true, I would have a chance    80_______

of winning the prize. What were better, I had useful         81______

help. There was Uncle Chen, gentleman living             82______

near my house, who was a very much famous writer.        83______

He agreed to reading my story and give me some           84______

advices on how to write like a real writer.              85______

第二节　短文改错（每小题1分）
此题要求改正所给短文中的错误。如无错误，在答题卡相应的位置上画一个勾（√）；如有错误（每行只有一个错误），则按下列情况改正：
此行多一个词：把多余的词写在答题卡相应的位置上，用斜线（﹨）划掉；
此行缺一个词：在答题卡相应的位置上写出该加的词，并附带前（后）词；
此行错一个词：在答题卡相应的位置上写出该错词和改正后的词。
My hometown is a large city on the north of       ⒈____________
China. People there live a very good life. There are    ⒉____________
many factories and department store in the city.   ⒊____________
Recently many old houses have replaced by many       ⒋____________
tall buildings. Roads and streets have become more     ⒌____________
longer and wider. What’s more, there were a lot of     ⒍____________
universities here, that are very famous in China. In     ⒎____________
the past few years, great changes have been taken       ⒏____________
place here. I hope it will become more and more ⒐____________
beautifully in the future. In a word, I love my hometown.  ⒑____________

第二节 短文改错（共10小题；每小题1. 5分，满分15分） 

此题要求改正所给短文中的错误。如有错误（每行只有一个错误），如无错误，在答题卡相应的位置上画一个勾（√）；如有错误（每行只有一个错误），则按下列情况改正； 

此行多一个词：把多余的词写在答题卡相应的位置上，用斜线（﹨）划掉。 

此行缺一个词：在答题卡相应的位置上写出该加的词，并附带前（后）词。 

此行错一个词：在答题卡相应的位置上写出该错词和改正后的词。 

注意：原行没有错的不用改。 

Students today should do more reading. Indeed, the importance         

of reading can never be too stressed. First of all, reading, especial       76.___________         

out-of-class reading, enrich our mind and broadens our horizons.      77.__________ 

Through read, we learn what cannot be learnt in our classrooms.      78.___________            

Besides, reading is also a way of relaxation. This is very refreshing    79.___________ 

to read a story before going to bed, or after a day of the study.         80.___________            

There were many famous sayings about reading, like “Reading       81.___________           

is to the mind that exercise is to the body”. Then how can we          82.____________            

develop the habit of reading? In the first place, I believe we need begin  83._____________           

from an early age, and then stick on it and never give up. Secondly, we  84.___________           

should read what we are interested and also what is proper for us.      85_____________           

第二卷

注意事项：

  1答题前，考生先在答题卡上用直径0．5毫米黑色墨水签字笔将自己的姓名、准考

    证号填写清楚，然后贴好条形码。请认真核准条形码上的准考证号、姓名和科目；

  2第二卷共2页，请用直径0．5毫米黑色墨水签字笔在答题卡上各题的答题区域

    内作答，在试题卷上作答无效。

第四部分写作(共两节，满分35分)

第一节短文改错(共l0小题；每小题l分，满分l0分)

    (注意：在试题卷上作答无效)

    此题要求改正所给短文中的错误。对标有题号的每一行作出判断：如无错误，在该

行右边横线上画一个勾(√)；如有错误(每行只有一个错误)，则按下列情况改正：

    此行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线()划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用

斜线划掉。

    此行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(/)，在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。

    此行错一个词：在错的词下划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。

    注意：原行没有错的不要改。

It was a chance of a lifetime to win the first         76_______

prize on the Story Writing Show. All I had to do       77_______

was to write a story or present it. My teachers        78_______

have been telling me how great my writing was.         79_______

So if they had said was true, I would have a chance    80_______

of winning the prize. What were better, I had useful         81______

help. There was Uncle Chen, gentleman living             82______

near my house, who was a very much famous writer.        83______

He agreed to reading my story and give me some           84______

advices on how to write like a real writer.              85______