英语课上，老师要求同学相互修改作文。假设以下文章为你同桌所写，请你对其进行修改。文章中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（∧），并在此符号下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（﹨）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

　　　　 2. 只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

请同学们严格按宁夏高考考试说明修改！

Dear Boy,

　 Glad to get your letter. I hope you’re well now. No one love you any more if you do not wear expensive clothes. You are so a clever boy and always work very hardly. I am sure you’ll have a promising future. Sometimes some people judged a person by the clothes he wears, but time will soon prove you are wrong. Knowledge is beauty. It lasts longer and seems much more nicer than the clothes one wears. Who cares that Marie Cruie was wearing when she won the Nobel Prize? To my opinion, clothes are part of life, but not all. Please don’t think too many of it, will you?

　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 Yours,

　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 Li Hua

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英语课上，老师要求同学相互修改作文。假设以下日记为你同桌所写，请你对其进行修改。日记中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（∧），并在此符号下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（﹨）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

　　　　 2. 只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

Today we have a short trip to Nanshan Park. We set out by the school bus at 7:20 a.m.. The weather was pleasant and all of us were exciting. After two hours ride, we arrived at there at nine thirty. Then we began our program as soon as we got off the bus. We played games in the forest very happy. At 12:30, we had lunch in a restaurant. In the afternoon we walked to the wild animal park where we saw varieties animals. We enjoyed ourselves very much. Time passed quickly but we had to leave. It was half past six when they returned safely.

英语课上，老师要求同学相互修改作文。假设以下日记为你同桌所写，请你对其进行修改。日记中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（∧），并在此符号下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（﹨）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

　　　　 2. 只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

Today we have a short trip to Nanshan Park. We set out by the school bus at 7:20 a.m.. The weather was pleasant and all of us were exciting. After two hours ride, we arrived at there at nine thirty. Then we began our program as soon as we got off the bus. We played games in the forest very happy. At 12:30, we had lunch in a restaurant. In the afternoon we walked to the wild animal park where we saw varieties animals. We enjoyed ourselves very much. Time passed quickly but we had to leave. It was half past six when they returned safely.

英语课上，老师要求同学相互修改作文。假设以下日记为你同桌所写，请你对其进行修改。文章中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（∧），并在此符号下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（﹨）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

　　　　 2. 只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

May 10，2008　　　　　　　　 Fine

Today I was having a PE lesson while I fell down and hurt my foot. I was in greatly pain at that

moment, but I tried to act as if nothing has happened until the class was over. Though I had

difficulty walk back to my classroom, I still didn’t tell anyone but even refused the offer of help

of my classmates. As result, the hurt in my foot became worse. Now I know I’m wrong .We can

tell others our need for help and accept his help. Some day we can not help others in return. . In

this way, we can get along to each other happily and peaceful.