Dear Aunt,

but I don’t know how to change her mind. Would you help me ?

                                Yours, Li Lin

Dear Aunt,

I am unhappy now, and I don’t know how I should do.         1           

Mary and I got to know each other through English                2 _____ ___

chat-room.. Since then, we have had chatted online almost         3 ____ __ __

every night. We have many in common as we are both               4 ____ __ __

girls at the same age. We would like to tell each other many        5 _________

things which are kept secretly to others. I will feel                     6 ______  

uncomfortable unless I can’t find her online.                             7 _____   

Besides, she told me two days ago that she would go                 8 ____    _

abroad soon. She insisted that she would get good education      9 _______ _

.abroad than at home. I know it is wrong for her to think so,      10 ____    

but I don’t know how to change her mind. Would you help me ?

                                Yours, Li Lin

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号∧,并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线/ 划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不记分。
Dear Aunt,
I am unhappy now, and I don’t know how I should do. Mary and I got to know each other through English chat-room. Since then, we have had chatted online almost every night. We have many in common as we are both girls at the same age. We would like to tell each other many things which are kept secretly to others. I will feel uncomfortable unless I can’t find her online. Besides, she told me two days ago that she would go abroad soon. She insisted that she would get good education abroad than at home. I know it is wrong for her to think so, but I don’t know how to change his mind. Would you help me?
Yours,
Li Lin

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号∧,并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线/ 划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不记分。

Dear Aunt,

I am unhappy now, and I don’t know how I should do. Mary and I got to know each other through English chat-room. Since then, we have had chatted online almost every night. We have many in common as we are both girls at the same age. We would like to tell each other many things which are kept secretly to others. I will feel uncomfortable unless I can’t find her online. Besides, she told me two days ago that she would go abroad soon. She insisted that she would get good education abroad than at home. I know it is wrong for her to think so, but I don’t know how to change his mind. Would you help me?

Yours,

Li Lin