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假设你是李华,你的英国笔友Bob将于十月到你所在城市的建新华文中学学中文,来信请你在学校附近为他找一套住房。请根据图画提供的信息,写信介绍住房的情况,并告知住房面积为25平方米,月租500元。

[写作要求]

只能使用5个句子表达全部的内容,开头已经写好,不计入总句数。

参考词汇:房租— rent (n .)。

内容要点:

1.公寓(一室带浴室、厨房)   

2.面积、家具(25平米、床、沙发、书桌、椅子)

3.公寓位置(芳草街,离学校一站远)

4.月租500元

5.结尾

 [评分标准] 句子结构的准确性,信息内容的完整性和连贯性。

Dear Bob,

  I’m so glad to learn that you’re coming in October.                                                                                

                                                                              

                                                                                                                                                                

                                                                                                                                                                

                                                                                                                                                               

                                                                                

                                                                            

                                                                                               Yours,

Li Hua

 

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