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阅读下面的短文,然后按照要求写一篇150词左右的英语短文。

  Learning to study is not difficult.The first thing to remember is that you must be willing to learn.It doesn't mean that you must always like the subject.It does mean, however, that you must be willing to learn whatever is necessary.Try to understand why it is important and how it will help you now and later.Knowing mathematical facts will be useful in your whole life.Knowing how to spell words makes any kind of writing easier.Sometimes the subject that you think is going to be uninteresting and it will be attractive when you began to work on it.Learning things can be fun if you can try your best.

  Here’s some advice for you:have a certain time each day and a quiet place with good lighting for study, so that you can concentrate on you study without interruptions.Have everything ready before you sit down to study, a dictionary, paper, a pen and books.Be sure you understand what you should learn before you start.Read carefully and pay special attention to the most important things.When memorizing, find out the main parts and then recite the whole thing.Check your homework after you finish it.Never forget the importance of review and preview.

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以约30个词概括短文的内容要点。

然后以约120词就“想学就能学好”的主题发表看法,并包含如下要点:

以亲身经历说明只有想学才能学好这个道理;

学习本身就是乐趣;

要有良好的学习方法;

学习并不是难事。

[写作要求]

可以使用实例或其他论述方法支持你的观点,也可以参照阅读材料的内容,但不要直接引用原文中的句子。

[评分标准]

概括准确,语言规范,内容合适,篇章连贯

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阅读下面的短文,然后按照要求写一篇150词左右的英语短文。

  Scientists find that hard-working people live longer than average men and women.Career women are healthier than housewives.Evidence shows that the jobless are in poorer health than the job-holders.A study shows that whenever the employment rate increases by 1%, the death rate increase correspondingly(相应地)by 2%.All this comes down to one point:work is helpful to health.

  Why is work good for health? It is because work keeps people busy, away from loneliness.Researches show that people feel unhappy, worried and lonely when they have nothing to do.Instead, the happiest are those who are busy.Work serves as a bridge between man and reality.By work, people come into contact with each other.By collective activities, they find friendship and warmth.This is helpful to health.The loss of work means the loss of everything.It affects man spiritually and makes him likely to disease.

  Besides, work gives one a sense of fulfillment and a sense of achievement.Work makes one feel his value and status in society.When a writer finishes his writing or teacher sees his students grow, they are happy beyond words.

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1)以约30个词概括短文的要点;

2)然后以约120个词就“努力学习,快乐生活”的主题发表看法,并包括如下要点:

a)你赞同“努力学习也可以快乐生活”这一观点吗?为什么?

b)举例说明你的同学是如何努力学习并保持健康乐观的心态的?

c)简述如何才能做到努力学习并快乐生活?

[写作要求]

(1)可以使用实例或其它论述方法支持你的论点,也可以参照阅读材料的内容,但不得直接引用原文中的句子;

(2)标题自定。

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概括准确,语言规范,内容合适,篇章连贯。

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