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       I am always interested in the traveling. My                       1._________

reasons are quite simple and clearly. If anybody                        2._________

is not satisfied with my opinion, I shall greatly                         3._________

surprised at his ways of think.                                                 4._________

       First of all, traveling increased our                           5._________

knowledge. Only by traveling can we see thing                  6._________

outside our hometown.

       In the second place, traveling is good with                 7._________

our health. While we are traveling, we can                        8._________

breathe in fresh air or exercise our bodies as well.                     9._________

       In a word, I sincerely hope that anybody must            10.________

grasp the opportunity of traveling.

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　　I am always interested in the traveling. My reasons are quite simple and clearly. If anybody is not satisfied with my opinion, I shall greatly surprised at his ways of think.

　　First of all, traveling increased our knowledge. Only by traveling can we see thing outside our hometown.

　　In the second place, traveling is good with our health：While we are traveling, we can breathe in fresh air or exercise our bodies as well.

1．________　　2．________　　3．________　　4．________

5．________　　6．________　　7．________　　8．________

9．________　　10．________

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