此题要求改正所给短文中的错误。对标有题号的每一行作㈩判断：如无错误，在该行右边横线上画一个勾(／)；如有错误(每行只有一个错误)，则按下列情况改正：

此行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉，在该行右边横线上写㈩该词，并也用斜线划掉。

此行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(八)，在该行右边横线上写㈩该加的词。

此行错一个词：在错的词下划一横线，在该行右边横线上写㈩改正后的词。

注意：原行没有错的不要改。

Dear Editor,

My name is Li Hua. Recently I find more and more difficult to   76.          

communicate with our parents on some questions. For example,       77.          

I do want to have a relaxing summer vacation, and they want to       78.          

send me to some training class. I want to find a part-time job,         79.          

but they say I was too young. What's more, they think I can't do       80.          

the hard work. I want to do a social survey, but they say that it        81.          

is actually waste of time. I am feeling helpless. Would you like        82.          

to give me some advice on what is to do with this? I would appreciate  83.          

it that I could get your help. I'm sure, with your help, I call solve      84.          

these problems easily. I'm looking forward to hear from you soon.     85.          

Yours,                                                                                  Li Hua

此题要求改正所给短文中的错误。对标有题号的每一行作㈩判断：如无错误，在该行右边横线上画一个勾(／)；如有错误(每行只有一个错误)，则按下列情况改正：

    此行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉，在该行右边横线上写㈩该词，并也用斜线划掉。

    此行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(八)，在该行右边横线上写㈩该加的词。

    此行错一个词：在错的词下划一横线，在该行右边横线上写㈩改正后的词。

注意：原行没有错的不要改。

Dear Editor,

     My name is Li Hua. Recently I find more and more difficult to   76.          

communicate with our parents on some questions. For example,       77.          

I do want to have a relaxing summer vacation, and they want to       78.          

send me to some training class. I want to find a part-time job,         79.          

but they say I was too young. What's more, they think I can't do       80.          

the hard work. I want to do a social survey, but they say that it        81.          

is actually waste of time. I am feeling helpless. Would you like        82.          

to give me some advice on what is to do with this? I would appreciate  83.          

it that I could get your help. I'm sure, with your help, I call solve      84.          

these problems easily. I'm looking forward to hear from you soon.     85.          

                                                                                 Yours,                                                                                  Li Hua

书面表达（满分25分）
下面是《21世纪报中学生班》（21^st Century School Edition）刊登的一封读者来信，请你以编辑张华的身份给这位中学生写封回信。
Dear editor,
I spend most of my time studying; I hardly talk to my classmates. Sometimes I don’t care much about others, but I do want to talk. I just don’t know what to talk about and how to begin a conversation.
I feel so lonely. How I wish I had a good friend! Could you give me some advice?
Yours,
Jin Jing
注意：
1.回信的内容要包括以下要点：
1） 要相信自己，你最大的问题是缺乏自信；
2） 微笑面对同学，让他们相信你是友好的；
3） 先试着与一个和你同样害羞的或与你有同样爱好的同学交谈，可以问一些学习上的问题，谈谈共同的爱好；
4） 帮助学习和生活上有困难的同学。
2． 信的开头已写好，不计入总词数；
3． 词数: 100---120词（不含已写好的部分）。
Dear Jin Jing,
Your problem is a common one among middle school students. Maybe the following advice can help you. _________________________________________________________________
                                                                           
                                                                           

下面是《21世纪报中学生班》（21^st Century School Edition ）刊登的一封读者来信，请你以编辑张华的身份给这位中学生写封回信。

Dear editor,

I spend most of my time studying; I hardly talk to my classmates. Sometimes I don’t care much about others, but I do want to talk. I just don’t know what to talk about and how to begin a conversation.

I feel so lonely. How I wish I had a good friend! Could you give me some advice?

                                                        Yours,

                                                        Jin Jing

注意：

1.回信的内容要包括以下要点：

要相信自己，你最大的问题是缺乏自信；

微笑面对同学，让他们相信你是友好的；

先试着与一个和你同样害羞的或与你有同样爱好的同学交谈，可以问一些学习上的问题，谈谈共同的爱好；

帮助学习和生活上有困难的同学。

2． 信的开头已写好，不计入总词数；

3． 词数：不少于100词（不含已写好的部分）。

参考词汇：自信self-confidence  n.

缺乏lack vt.

Dear Jin Jing,

Your problem is a common one among middle school students. Maybe the following advice can help you. _________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________

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Yours,

                                                     Zhang Hua