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英语课上，老师要求同学相互修改作文。假设以下日记为你同桌所写，请你对其进行修改。文章中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（∧），并在此符号下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（﹨）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
May 10，2008 Fine
Today I was having a PE lesson while I fell down and hurt my foot. I was in greatly pain at that
moment, but I tried to act as if nothing has happened until the class was over. Though I had
difficulty walk back to my classroom, I still didn’t tell anyone but even refused the offer of help
of my classmates. As result, the hurt in my foot became worse. Now I know I’m wrong .We can
tell others our need for help and accept his help. Some day we can not help others in return. . In
this way, we can get along to each other happily and peaceful.
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I ran into a stranger as he passed by. “Oh, excuse me please” was my __41 . He said: “Please excuse me too; I wasn’t watching for you.” We were very 42 , this stranger and I. We went on our way and we said goodbye. But at home a 43 story is told.
Later that day, when I was cooking the evening meal, my daughter stood beside me very 44 . When I 45 , I nearly knocked her down. “Move out of the 46 ,” I said with a frown. She walked away, her little heart broken. I didn’t 47 how harshly (严厉地) I’d spoken.
While I lay awake in bed that evening, my husband said to me, “While 48 a stranger, you are polite, but with the girl you love, you are 49 . Go look on the kitchen floor; you’ll find some flowers by the door. Those are the flowers she brought for 50 . She picked them herself: pink, yellow and blue. She stood quietly not to 51 the surprise, and you 52 saw the tears in her eyes.”
__53 , my tears began to fall. I quietly went and knelt down by her bed. “Wake up, little girl,” I said. “Are these flowers you picked for me?” She smiled: “I found them out by the tree. I picked them 54 they’re pretty like you. I knew you’d like them, especially the blue.”
I said: “Daughter, I’m sorry for the way I 55 today. I 56 have yelled at you that way.”
She said: “Oh Mom, that’s okay. I love you anyway.”
I said: “Daughter, I love you too. And I do like the flowers, especially the blue.”
I had got the world 57 again. I’d 58 to be polite to people in the street – good 59 make society work. But a stranger is someone we bump into once and then never see again – and 60 is for life.
41. A. answer B. words C. response D. speech
42. A. careful B. polite C. serious D. unhappy
43. A. interesting B. meaningful C. similar D. different
44. A. still B. noisy C. upset D. excited
45. A. called B. turned C. returned D. removed
46. A. house B. space C. way D. area
47. A. realize B. care C. prove D. understand
48. A. referring to B. listening to C. dealing with D. picking up
49. A. anxious B. patient C. disappointed D. unkind
50. A. us B. you C. the family D. her friends
51. A. ruin B. expect C. announce D. handle
52. A. seldom B. simply C. even D. never
53. A. By this time B. At one time C. For a time D. At the same time
54. A. while B. so C. unless D. because
55. A. considered B. acted C. developed D. performed
56. A. shouldn’t B. couldn’t C. wouldn’t D. mustn’t
57. A. clear B. right C. beautiful D. meaningful
58. A. begin B. learn C. continue D. change
59. A. manners B. habits C. lifestyles D. behaviors
60. A. lover B. companion C. family D. friend
查看习题详情和答案>>Some years ago when I was in my first year in college, I heard Salome Bey sing for the first time. The moment was exciting. Salome’s 36 filled the room and brought the theater to life. I was so 37 that I decided to write an article about her.
I 38 Salome Bey, telling her I was from Essence magazine, and that I wanted to meet her to talk about her career. She 39 and told me to come to her studio next Tuesday. When I hung up, I was scared out of my mind. I 40 I was lying. I was not a writer at all and hadn’t even written a grocery list.
I interviewed Salome Bey the next Tuesday. I sat there 41 , taking notes and asking questions that all began with, “Can you tell me…” I soon realized that 42 Salome Bey was one thing, but writing a story for a national magazine was just impossible. The 43 was almost unbearable. I struggled for days 44 draft after draft. Finally I put my manuscript (手稿) into a large envelope and dropped it into a mailbox.
It didn’t take long. My manuscript 45 . How stupid of me! I thought. How could I 46 in a world of professional writers? Knowing I couldn’t 47 the rejection letter, I threw the unopened envelope into a drawer.
Five years later, I was moving to California. While 48 my apartment, I came across the unopened envelope. This time I opened it and read the editor’s letter in 49 :
Ms Profit,
Your story on Salome Bey is fantastic. Yet we need some 50 materials. Please add those and return the article immediately. We would like to 51 your story soon.
Shocked, it took me a long time to 52 . Fear of rejection cost me dearly. I lost at least five hundred dollars and having my article appear in a major magazine. More importantly, I lost years of 53 writing. Today, I have become a full – time writer. Looking back on this 54 , I learned a very important lesson: You can’t 55 to doubt yourself.
36．A．voice B．joy C．speech D．smile
37．A．proud B．moved C．satisfied D．active
38．A．visited B．phoned C．emailed D．interviewed
39．A．paused B．refused C．hesitated D．agreed
40．A．knew B．discovered C．explained D．replied
41．A．seriously B．nervously C．patiently D．quietly
42．A．fooling B．blaming C．inviting D．urging
43．A．hardship B．failure C．pressure D．comment
44．A．by B．with C．on D．in
45．A．disappeared B．spread C．returned D．improved
46．A．compete B．struggle C．survive D．compare
47．A．ignore B．deliver C．face D．receive
48．A．decorating B．cleaning C．repairing D．leaving
49．A．trouble B．anxiety C．horror D．disbelief
50．A．relevant B．subjective C．private D．reliable
51．A．broadcast B．create C．publish D．assess
52．A．prepare B．recover C．escape D．concentrate
53．A．energetic B．endless C．typical D．enjoyable
54．A．experience B．success C．benefit D．accident
55．A．attempt B．expect C．afford D．pretend
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阅读下面的短文，然后按照要求写一篇150词左右的英语短文。
On Sundays my father always wore that dull gray apron(围裙)．The ritual began after breakfast when Dad always announced, "Go ahead everyone．I'll take care of the dishes! " Off came the suit coat he had worn to church that morning．Up went the shirtsleeves．On went that apron．For the next hour Dad did the dishes, singing songs like "Who Put the Chow in Mrs, Murphy's Chowder? "
I suppose it was strange for a boy's father to wear an apron but I never thought much of it until the day that Dad broke with tradition．It was the last Sunday in August．
"Tommy, " he said letting my name roll off his tongue．My mind raced ahead of his words：A new bike? A part-time-job?
"There comes a time in every boy's life when he must take on responsibilities．"
"Responsibilities? " I asked．
"Yes, It's time you took a greater role in the household．" Power tools? Boss my baby brother?
"Starting today, I want you to do the dishes on Sunday morning so your mother and I can work the crossword puzzle together．"
"The dishes! ?"
"Anything wrong with taking over the dishes, son? "
Ask me to run through a rainstorm．Command me to ride the roller coaster-backward．These things I would do．But I could never do those dishes．There was nothing left but to refuse．
People often say there is a special chemistry between a father and a son．He came back into the kitchen just as I was about to storm out．In his right hand was the old apron．
"I want you to have this, Tommy．It'll keep your clothes from getting wet．" And before I could mount a protest, he had put the thing on me．"Thanks, Son．Your mother and I appreciate this．"．
With that he disappeared into the Sunday paper．Soon I was singing about Mrs．Murphy's chowder．The words came out of nowhere．And out of nowhere I knew the kind of man I wanted to be．
[写作内容]
1．以约30个词概括短文的内容；
2．然后以约120个词表达你对“承担家务责任”的看法，并包括以下要点：
(1)你觉得现在孩子做家务的情况如何；
(2)你认为孩子在家是否需承担家务的责任；
(3)以你自己或他人的体验，说明承担家务责任对孩子成长带来的影响。
[写作要求]
1．在作文中可以使用自己亲身的经历或虚构的故事，也可以参照阅读材料的内容，但不得直接引用原文中的句子；
2．作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。
[评分标准]
概括准确，语言规范，内容合适，语篇连贯。