摘要:第二节 书面表达 One possible version Boys and girls, Recently some blood banks across the country are reported to be short of blood supplies. Some people hold the wrong idea that donating blood does harm to the donators’ health so we shouldn’t donate our blood to others. But the truth is that when a small amount of blood is taken out, the body will make a quick adjustment to work normally. As we know, donating blood is of great importance. Blood is important to patients, without which many of them can’t survive. And to the youth in the new age, not only is donating blood for free a social responsibility, but also it is the spirit of cooperation and sharing. We senior high school students who have a better understanding of medical knowledge should set a good example to other people. From now on, our school will hold a series of activities to tell people the benefits of donating blood. Do it now, starting from you and your family. Students Union 英语作文评分细则 分档 分数范围 标准 极优档 30 书写规范,覆盖所有要点.内容充实,词汇丰富.有修辞意识. 优秀 26-29 紧扣主题,覆盖所有要点.内容充实,语法结构多样.词汇丰富.显示出较强的语言运用能力.语言小错不超过6个. 良好 22-25 紧扣主题.覆盖所有要点.内容较充实.语言有少量错误.但基本不影响意思表达. 一般 18-21 紧扣主题.基本覆盖所有要点.能够表达基本内容,语言错误已影响了部分意思的表达.但多数句子基本正确. 较差 13-17 内容不完整.要点不全.行文不连贯,语言错误较多.多数句子基本正确. 差 6-12 内容混乱或主要内容偏离主题.能够写出少数与内容相关的可读句. 极差 0-5 只能写出与内容相关的词语.没有有效信息,抄写其他文章或只写出与作文无关的内容. 关于大错.小错的问题: 1.小错:单词拼写.冠词.大小写.标点符号错误. 2.大错:搭配错误.词语用错(介词.名词.动词.形容词.副词).时态.语态.主谓一致. 非谓语动词.句式等错误. (山东省罗美中学2011届高三11月月考)

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