假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文?请你修改你同桌写的以下作文. 文中共有10处语言错误?每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。 增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(^)?并在其下面写出该加的词。删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。 修改:在错的词下划一横线?并在该词下面写出修改后的词。 注意: 1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词; 2. 只允许修改10处?多者(从第11处起)不计分。 
I’m the captain of our school team so with my fellow players  we’ve won several games. There will an important game next month.  But one of the best player in our team told me just then that he wouldn’t  play basketball once more. His parents asked him to spend in more time  preparing for the  college entrance examination. I feel sorry to him.
But his parents think go to college is more important than playing sports  and college was the only place for a smart boy like his son. So my friend had  no choice. He wanted to make their parents happy.  

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

      2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

 As we all know, traveling can be an excited experience．Let me give you some

advices about the things that you have to pay attention．You can find out more

about your destination by surf the Internet before you set out．You needn’t take too

many money．Though it can be very convenient to pay in cash, using bank cards is

much more reliable．In additional, it will be necessary for you to take an umbrella in

case of it should rain．And if you are to travel abroad, you’d better understand the

cultural differences．Keep this in mind that being politely in foreign countries can

help you had a wonderful trip．

请你对下文内容进行修改。文章中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（∧），并在此符号下面写出该加的词

删除：把多余的词用斜线（﹨）划掉

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下写出修改后的词

注意： 1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词

2．只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分

John is a tall man weighing as much as 100 kilogram(公斤). Though he is large, but he fears dogs. One day he was take a walk when a dog suddenly appeared nowhere. He became such nervous that he ran as fast as he could. The dog kept run after him and it was getting closer. In the dangerous situation, John decided climb up a tree to avoid the dog. Unfortunate, it was not a easy job. He hadn’t gone up very high when the dog stood right under the tree. The dog jumped up and bit it’s teeth into his bottom. John fell right onto the dog’s head, that killed it immediately.   

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(﹨) 画掉。
修改:在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1?每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2?只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
I go abroad for further studies half a year ago.I received a lot of present.All were wrapped in colour paper.Among them was two presents which really interested in me.My sister bought me the book with colour pictures about body language and with words about customs of differently countries in it.My brother gave me a note, it read,”My present for you has been put in my bedroom.” When I hurried into my bedroom,I found a box in it.Open the box,I found a pocket computer.I was very glad.I understood these two presents would be great help to me in improving my English.

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文.
文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(^)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
I am a high school student. A few days before one of my very good friend told me that he was going to stop school. He said that he wanted to start his own’s business. I tried my best to get him to change his mind and failed. I realized it was difficult of me to change his mind. He is not doing so good in his studied. The process are more important than the result. Now there are only 90 days being left before the test. I am not sure that his decision is right or wrong. I needed your advice.