短文改错

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏子符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：

1．每处错误仅限1词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

Dear Abby,

　　How are you? Today I’ve got a wonderful news to tell you．I have offered a scholarship at a university in Australia for my further education．One hundred and twenty students took exam for it, but only a few was chosen and I was one of them．However, my parents are not happy about it．They are strong against me going there．They said it is too far away that they will not see me for a whole year and they are afraid I will feel lonely．They can't imagine a girl so young live alone．They advise me to study in the capital instead．Then I'll be able to continue living with them．How can I persuade him to accept the fact I have grown up?

Best wishes,

Jane

短文改错

文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分

I had a interesting dream last night．I dreamed that I took part in a race．At first, I could not to run very fast and fell behind．So I didn't lose heart and kept running．All the students on the playground cheer me on, “ Come on! ” I was so encouraged that I ran faster and fast till I caught up all the other runners．I felt as if flying like a superman．In the end, I got the finishing line first．I won the race．I felt very proudly of myself．Many of my classmate threw me up into the air．Just at that time I woke up and found me still in bed!

短文改错

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线(﹨)划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线(________)，并在该词下面写出修改的词。

注意：1．每处错误及修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分

　　Dear Editor,

　　My name is Xiao Hai, boy student in Senior Three．Recently, I’ve read in Shanghai Students’ Post what you need some students reporters．I am anxious to be one of them．I very like English．I have been learned it since eight years ago．Now I can talk with foreigners with English．I can read China Daily．I took a first place in an English Composition Contest．Besides, I do well in a computer competition．Would you be so kind as to receive me? I am looking forward to hear from you soon．

文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在此处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出修改的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在其下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者(从十一处起)不计分。

sir,

　　I'm glad to recommend(推荐)you to my friend Li Ming．Li Ming was born in July 15, 1974 in Beijing．He graduated from Xisi Primary School in 1986．

　　When he was in the middle school, he did good in maths, physics and chemistry and fond of art．After graduating from No．4 High School, he entered Beijing University study physics．After four year of hard work there, he went to the United States for further study．Because of his excellent work, he get a doctor's degree in physics in this year．He is now in good health but would like to make contributions to our country．I will be most gratefully if you consider my recommendation．

　　Looking forward to receive your early reply

Yours truly,

Wang Lin

文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在此处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出修改的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在其下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者(从十一处起)不计分。

When tea and coffee was first introduced to Europe in the 18th century, people thought they were harm．So the king of Sweden decided to find out that this was true or not．It was happened that there were two brothers were in prison at the time．The king ordered one of them to drink tea every day and other coffee．Both of them have lived many years without any problem．At last the one who had to drink tea died on the age of 83 and the other lived even long．Because of this, Sweden is today one of the country where tea and coffee are drunk．

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。 文中共有10处语言错误。每句最多两处错误。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改正后的词。

注意：

1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

Dear classmates,

　　I'll tell you everything about my future．Every one of us is thinking about the future．Do you know what that mine is? I have decided to become the middle school teacher．Does it sound surprising? I have this dream when I was only a child．I love children．As we all can see, teachers are great needed in our country, especially in the countryside．Many parents want his children to be well-educated, and they don't want them to be teachers．Perhaps one of the main reason is that teachers work too hard but get too little．In spite that, I am determined to devote all my life to teach in my hometown．

短文改错

英语课上，老师要求同桌同学相互修改作文。假设以下短文为你同桌所写，请你对其进行修改。文中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号∧，并在此符号下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线\划掉。

修改：在错词下面划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1、每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2、只允许修改10处，多者从第11处不计分。

Good morning, ladies and gentlemen! I'd like tell you something about the holiday we have arranged it for you．For those who wants to ski, you can rent skis on the spot, and boots too．Surely it is better if you have your own boots．Don't forget it can get quite cold in the day, so warm clothes are must．The ski-poles are often very hot when it is sunny, so be care not to get burnt．The hotel booking for you is very comfortable, and the nights do get very cold sometimes, so be prepared．For those looking for another activities, there are lovely walks, good views and interesting birds up the hill．Finally, I'd like to mention what we offer excellent opportunities to try delicious and unusually food．

短文改错

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10 处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加，删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一次；

2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不记分。

My grandfather was a teacher．He was the head teacher of a school for boys at the age of thirteen and eighteen．I know that he was a kind man, because when I am young, he gave me presents, set me on his knees, and told me stories．And the boys at his school were afraid of him．At school, when he walked into a room full of noise boys, there was silence at once．When he looked at a boy with a certain look in his eye, that boy went red in the face, and looked down his shoes．If a boy brought to him careless work, my grandfather picked up a boy's book and threw it across the room, shouting, “ Do it all again, and take it back the first thing in the morning! ” If the boy was later, or if he forgot to take the work, he had to do it again．