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假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加上一个漏词符号(∧)，并在此符号下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

　　Last year, I was addicted with playing computer games．I found it hard to breaking away from the bad habit．My teacher talked to my parents about this, and they made me to promise not to play those games again．I tried hard, but I found it uselessly．The moment my fingers left the keyboard, I would feel very uncomfortable．Because I was determined to forget the games, I still could not concentrate on the lessons giving in classes．

　　Fortunately, psychological advisor in our school came to know this．He talks with me about his problem．At last, he offered his advices on how to get rid of the addiction．Now I can manage to control myself．

短文改错

假如英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌的以下作文。文中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号∧，并在此符号下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线＼划掉。

修改：在错词下面划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1、每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2、只允许修改10处，多者从第11处不计分

When I was an elementary school student aging ten, I took part in a singing competition in our city．This was my first time to be in a singing competition．In the day of the competition, I was asked to enter into a studio room, which there was only one person and a piano．The man asked me to sing in front of the microphone, following his piano playing．My mother was waiting for me outside the studio．I thought that I sang better at the time．So when I finished and walked out the studio, my mother asked, “What happened to your voices? Why couldn't we hear you? ” Then, I realized that I forget to switch on the microphone．

短文改错

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文．文中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处．错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改．

增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号(∧)，并在此符号下面写出该加的词．

删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉．

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词．

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分．

Dear Tom,

　　I know there have trouble for you to communicate with Others, and you may often feel lonely．That's why you are new here and people don't know about you．But I think you can make it if only you can follow the advices below．

　　First, you should take a active part in the discussions and show your own opinions about the matters．At the same time, never fail to listening to other people's views．Second, you should learn your classmates' likes and dislikes．Only in this way can you be able to get to know more different people and show them that you are actually very friendly．Last but not least, I will always ready to help you．We can take partin some activities together, when I can introduce you to others．

　　As time going on, people will know you better and be willing to make friends with you．

　　Best regards．

Peter

短文改错

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文．文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处．错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改．

增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词．

删除：把多余的词用斜线(﹨)划掉．

修改：在错的词下划一横线(________)，并在该词下面写出修改的词．

注意：

1．每处错误及修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分．

We were assigned a composition but I was in good mood for it until this morning．It is Sunday today, so I had a good sleep．When I get up, I had a strong desire do something．So I set about doing the toughest thing-writing a composition．I had an extreme quick head and a good idea upon other rushed into my mind．Before long I typed about 500 words．I skimmed through my work and was quite satisfying．It should be another model composition．I stretched myself, intend to polish it after a rest, so something unexpected had happened：the power failed suddenly．And I forgot to save the file!

短文改错

下面短文中有10处语言错误。请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写上该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。

2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11除起)不计分。

　　Thomas Edison, a famous American scientist and inventor, had more than 1000 inventions．As we know, one of his inventions is bulb and they changed the world very greatly that the lights in America were off for three minutes in the memory of him at his death．

　　I admire him because his great contribution to the world．Though not blessed with much gift and even thinking to be foolish in teachers’ eyes, but he never discouraged himself by difficulties in life, which instead motivated him to pursue his dream．Beside, in his spare time, he was always eager to know what things worked, which made him full of wisdom and paved the way for his final success．

　　Just as he says, genius is one percent inspiration and ninety-nine percent perspiration．From him, I realize the secret to success is not when and where you were born, but what you are doing and how you do it in your lives．

短文改错

英语课上，老师要求同桌同学相互修改作文。假设以下书信为你同桌所写，请你对其进行修改。文中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号(∧)，并在此符号下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1、每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2、只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

I like music very much, especially pop songs．Every evening then I am doing homework and at weekends when I at home, I always play some of my favorite songs on my tape recorder．The familiar patterns of notes attracts me into the colorfully world of music．Now and then I stopped to follow the songs．Sometimes, my mother comes in, asking me to fix my attention to my homework．She does not like the pop music．Like most grown-ups, she enjoys folk songs, because the peaceful music reminds her of their beautiful life when she was young．It is a truth which people of different age understand music differently and enjoy different kinds of music．

短文改错

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同学写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1、每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2、只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

A man got on a train and sit beside a woman．The woman was more than thirty year old．Soon they began talking to every other．He said to her, “Do you have a family? ”“Yes，I have one son ” the woman replied to．“Oh, really? ” said the man．“Does he smoke? ”“No，”the man answered．“That's good．” The man was glad to say, “I don't smoke，too．Smoking is bad for your healthy．And does your son often fight with others? ” “Oh, no．” the woman answered at once．“He never fights．” “Well, ” the man said．“He is a good young man．But how old is he? ” “Only three months old today．” The woman said with smile．