短文改错

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文,文中共有10处语言错误,每句最多有两处．错误涉及一个单词的增加,删除和修改．

增加：把缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该词．

删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉．

修改：在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词．

注意：1．每处错误极其修改均限一词．

2．只允许修改10处,多者从第11处不记分．

Dear Jin Jing,

Your problem is common one among middle school students．Maybe the following advices can help you．First in all, believe in yourself．Your greatest problem is that you lack self-confidence．The first thing you must do it is to smile at your classmates．One smile speaks loud about your wish to make friends than any words．Your smile will show that you are friendly to him．Next, trying talking with a student who is as shy as you or who share the same interest with you．You can discuss your studies with a classmate and you can also talk about your hobbies．Unless anyone is in trouble, you should be ready to help him or her．Once you have confidence, you can make as many friends as possibly．

Yours,

Lily

改错

文中共有十处语言错误，每句中最多有两处，每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加，删除或修改。只允许修改十处，多者从第十一处开始不计分。

　　I am so exciting that I can’t wait to share with you what I experienced today．I gave my first lesson in our school, which left me the deep impression．

　　When I entered into the classroom, my students began to make much noise．I stood on the platform, knowing what to do at first．But soon I realized everything must be done．I asked the kids that they liked English songs．They all say “Yes．” I sang a song I had practiced many times．To my great surprise, all the kids turned their attentions to my class．

　　From this experience I know however happens, we must stay calmly at first and find a wise solution．

短文改错

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。

2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

Mark Twain liked to play jokes in his friends．One day one of his friends lost his wallet and asked Mark pay the train fare for him．"But I haven't got enough money to pay both your fare or mine," Mark said．Then he adds, "We can get on the train first and when the conductor comes to check ticket, you hide under my seat．" Late, however, when the conductor came to check tickets, Mark gave him two more tickets．Then he said in the loud voice, "My friend is a strange man．When he travels on a train, he prefers to lying on the floor under the seat．" Of course many passengers laughed at his poorly friend．

短文改错

假如英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌的以下作文，文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加，删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

One day．I went shopping at a gifted shop in Shanghai．I was very interested and I lost me in the beautiful goods．After I paid for that I had bought, I left my handbag on the counter．There were about two thousand yuan in it, I had already walked out of the shop while a young shop assistant walk up to me with my handbag．He insisted my checking it．I opened the handbag and found nothing lost．I thanked for him and offered him the reward of 100 yuan, but he refused to take anything．I was deep moved by his selfless act that day．

短文改错

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处错误。错误涉及一个单词的增加，删除或修改。按下列情况改正：

删除：把多余的词用斜线(﹨)划掉。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，写出该加的词。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，写出改正后的词。

注意：每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

Bill worked in big office, and he usually went to the barber’s during working hours to have his hair cut．This against the rules：office workers had to have his hair cut in their own time．While Bill was at the barber’s on one day, the manager of the office entered in to have his own hair cut．Bill saw him and managed to hide his face．But the manager sat besides him, and soon recognized him．“Hello, Bill,” said the manager, “I know you are having your haircut．”“Yes, sir, I do,” said Bill．“You see, sir, it grows in office time．“Not all of it,” said the manager at once．“Some grows in your own time．”“Yes, sir, that’s quite true,” answered Bill polite, “but I’m not having it all cut off．”

短文改错

文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加，删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

One rainy day while I was walking home with one of my friend, a truck came to a stop besides us．The driver put the window down and offered us a umbrella because he found we were wet through．I stood there and couldn’t believe in that a complete stranger is so thoughtful．The man insisted, so I grateful accepted the offer, thanked him and watched the truck disappear down the road．This man might need the umbrella himself, and he preferred to give it to everyone else．It was a lesson to us that it was possible give without expect anything in return．

单句改错

多一个词：把多余的词用斜线(／)划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词，也用斜线划掉。

缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。

错一个词：在错的词下划一横线，写出改正后的词。

The ticket-inspector asked the passenger to show your ticket．

单句改错

多一个词：把多余的词用斜线(／)划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词，也用斜线划掉。

缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。

错一个词：在错的词下划一横线，写出改正后的词。

We all need a friend or two with who we can share almost everything．

单句改错

多一个词：把多余的词用斜线(／)划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词，也用斜线划掉。

缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。

错一个词：在错的词下划一横线，写出改正后的词。

I made up my mind to do my best to make a progress in English．