短文改错（10分）

下面短文中共有10处错误，错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（∧），并在此符号下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分

I still remember the morning. My father suddenly wake me up at about 5 and the sky was still gray. I jumped out bed surprised and extreme happy, for we were going to get a book! When we drove to the bookstore, many people were already waiting there. We waited for our turn at about 8:30. I was overjoyed when I got a book, not only because of the book themselves, but also of the love from my father. Never before had I felt such a love from him, because of my father, I believed then, had always been busy with his own work. That was “Harry Potter” that helped I feel the deep love from my parents!

假如你叫李华，你的美国笔友Mike即将随父母到中国，并在中国过中秋节。他来信向你询问有关中秋节的习俗，请你回信告诉他。要点如下：

1.历史悠久；  2. 中国的传统节日； （传统节日traditional  festival）

3. 家庭团圆； 4. 共进晚餐；  5.吃月饼；  6. 赏月；

要求：1、100词左右；2、可适当增加细节；3、开头已给出。

Dear Mike,

I’m glad to know that you are coming to China with your parents and spend the Mid-Autumn Day here.

                                                            Yours,

                                                            Li Hua

He always thinks of _______ he can do more for the people.

The monitor suggested that we ______ for a picnic on Sunday.

______ gets homes first is to cook the supper.

It depends on _______ he has enough money.

Either you or he _____ interested in playing chess. _____ you or he fond of music at present?

Her family _____ much larger than mine four years ago. Her family  _____ dancing and singing when I came in last night.

My little son _____ out alone at night.

My house is made out of wood, glass and stone. It is also made out of software.

If you come to visit, you’ll probably be surprised when you come in. Someone will give you an electronic PIN （个人身份号码）to wear. This PIN tells the house who and where you are. The house uses this information to give you what you need. When it’s dark outside, the PIN turns on the lights nearest you, and then turns them off as you walk away from them. Music moves with you too. If the house knows your favorite music, it plays it. The music seems to be everywhere, but in fact other people in the house hear different music or no music. If you get a telephone call, only the nearest telephone rings.

Of course, you are also able to tell the house if you want something. There is a home control console (控制台), a small machine that turns things on and off around you.

The PIN and the console are new ideas, but they are in fact like many things we have today. If you want to go to a movie, you need a ticket. If I give you my car keys, you can use my car. The car works for you because you have the keys. My house works for you because you wear the PIN or hold the console.

I believe that ten years from now, most new homes will have the systems that I’ve put in my house. The systems will probably be even bigger and better than the ones I’ve put in today.

I like to try new ideas. I know that some of my ideas will work better than others. But I hope that one day I will stop thinking of these systems as new, and ask myself instead, “How will I live without them?”

1.What does the passage mainly discuss?

2.What’s the purpose when the writer wrote the fourth paragraph?

3.The writer’s new house is different from ordinary ones mainly because _____.

4.What is the writer most likely to be according to the passage?

5.What can’t be done in the writer’s new house?