Being a winner

1.           Everyone wants to succeed in their career or life. Sometimes it is easy to get carried away with the eagerness to win and forget about the things in everyday life which are important. 2.           Education is the tool to succeeding in life and a person’s greatest accomplishments(成就) start with good education. School will prepare you for your toughest challenges and learning as much as you can will only make those challenges easier to face.

3.        Families are quite often a person’s biggest asset(财产) when facing a difficult obstacle(障碍). Support from a person’s family can help him or her accomplish anything. It is equally important for you to give your parents and family support when they face their challenges. You can learn from the challenges and accomplishments of others and at the same time know that your support made a difference in the outcome of a difficult obstacle. 

     4.        But always remember that being a winner is more than coming in first place in a tournament(锦标赛). The most important accomplishments are those that occur in everyday life. 5.       

    A. Being a winner is important to all of us.

    B. Your efforts will pay off sooner or later.

    C. Children need to work hard to be a winner in school.

    D. Being a winner is something that we all work hard for in life.

    E. It is also important to be a winner to your parents and family.

    F. It is important to know how to win support from your family or friends

   G. Being a good person and treating others with respect make you a true winner.

 

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Dear Ken,

I'm very exciting to have received an e-mail from you and I'm glad you had a

 

wonderfully time during the past summer holiday. Last summer I take a trip to the

 

 countryside with some of my friend. Country life, in my opinion, gave me peace

 

and quiet, which is what I can't enjoy in big cities. There was river nearby, in that

 

 we went swimming every now and then. You can never imagine what  fun  it

 

 was to swimming  together with friends in the cool, clean river on such hot days.

 In fact , I had never been had a better holiday before . I took plenty photos there

 

and I keep them where I can see them  every day as they always reminds me of

 

 my stay in the country.

                                                            Yours,

                                                            Li Ping

 

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