文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；               

2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第l1处起）不计分。

At the age of ten, I went on a school trip with my class to the zoo in Beijing. We left home very earlier in the morning because they had a long journey. We travelled to Beijing by the bus and we spent the whole day at the zoo. I can remember see an elephant for the first time. I was very exciting. At midday, we eat our picnic lunch in a park near the zoo. After lunch, we visited the reptile house or saw the snakes and crocodile. At five o’clock, we got the bus and drove home. What fantastic the trip was!

假设你是某中学的学生李华，最近收到美国朋友Joy的电子邮件。他在三年前参观过你校，听说你校现在变化很大，希望了解发生了哪些具体的变化。请你根据下表提示，给他回一封电子邮件。

注意：1. 词数100左右；2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；

3. 开头和结尾已给出，但不计入总词数。

参考词汇: 体育设施 sports facilities  装备 equip

Dear Joy,

I was pleased to hear from you and I’m writing to tell you something about the changes in my school.

___________________________________________________________________

                                                             Yours,

                                                             Li Hua

What _____ shame that you couldn’t go to the party. It was ______huge success.

Don’t drink and drive, or you’ll be punished by _____ of your driver’s license.

______ is known to all, Great Britain and Northern Ireland ______the United Kingdom 

You look very beautiful in this dress and there is only one of this kind left here. I wonder    if you would like to buy ______.

—The weather is too cold ______ March this year.

—It was even ____ when I came here years ago.

 ______ , he could not carry the rock to the other side of the river.

We give dogs time, space and love we can spare, and _______, dogs give us their all.

When you begin a sentence with “don’t tell anyone but …” there’s a 90% chance that the

person ______ someone.